Dreams Put On Hold

Fate met with life on a crossroad,
they saw me looking both ways,
hesitant to take any merging path;
fear overcame me, numbing my senses,
and frozen like Alaskan ice, I stood there.

Fate asked life to put dreams on hold,
but she protested with an astute reply,
" He's old, a huge debt you owe him! "
I waited while they battled with words;
a rushing thought invaded me , " Go! "

And I started running, not listening to them;
I realized that fate is what we make of it.
I remembered the card reader who suggested
I wore a talisman for good luck, I ignored her. 
If in defeat I mourn, or in triumph I cheer...
the voice that I heeded was a good omen.

I have lived longer than any true or untrue friend;
at their tombstones I stand and grieve their loss,
perhaps The Higher Power added years to this life
to recompense me for my patience and long wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/3/2016 3:30:00 AM
Andrew, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:31:00 AM
Lovely poem n win Andrew.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:31:00 PM
solid, pensive write, andrew.. congrats on your win and huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:24:00 PM
Andrew, a wonderful poem, congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:30:00 PM
I love reading poems like this, poems with a message. Well done, Andrew.
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:13:00 AM
a keen, intuitive look at life's reason for existence, andrew... superb!..huggs
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:00:00 AM
Very nice write, the ponderance of time and existence and I am glad you are still here to share with us all
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