Dreams of Paradise

Sunless days under artic charred skies frozen rain pelting, making me cry harsh north winds, chill to the bone why do I even call this place home? Dreams of paradise have begun Endless sunsets over clear cobalt seas Pure white sands blanketing a quiescent cove as a warm zephyr floats across my bronzing tan and then I see her that smooth Mediterranean toned skin sauntering slowly through the gentle tide playful splashes glimmering off her sun kissed lips her dark sunglasses and colourful hat attempting to hide her beauty but I know I can see it in her graceful gait in her sensuous sway the way she lightly kicks the water and definitely in her smile oh how she flashed it my way when she saw my stare when I walked up and she flipped that hair an angel rising from the sea my missing olive tree I knew I knew she was for me we walked the beach and talked she took my hand my heart went a flutter as our lovelorn lips locked I was home

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Date: 4/23/2015 5:41:00 PM
So let me get this straight you built your abode on her lips? Love those last two lines. The whole poem is wonderfully romantic.
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:48:00 PM
What a charmer!!! Absolutely beautiful romantic poem, Mr. Tim! WOWSERS!!!
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Date: 4/22/2015 3:51:00 PM
hypnotic and ohh so charming, tim... your last line says it all !.. huggs
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Date: 4/22/2015 2:32:00 PM
The author skillfully brought the reader into the story and we felt comfortable. Emile.
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Date: 4/22/2015 8:13:00 AM
Sincerely beautyful poem, Tim. It is when poetry helps to appreciate good things of life
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Date: 4/21/2015 11:40:00 PM
You just keep getting better and better! Kinda like the Habs!
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2015 11:43:00 PM
We are in ot again...going to be one of those years...see you in the finals : )
Date: 4/21/2015 7:27:00 PM
Home is where the heart is..So indeed it is..What an enchanting place you have painted.What a masterpiece of beauty the imagery you create..What a sweet story at play.To my favs!!!
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thank you Charma...that is so true home is where the heart is. even nicer if it is a beautiful paradise...so happy you liked this....hugs Tim
Date: 4/21/2015 6:41:00 PM
Tim, oh this was magical, so romantic, lovely, well penned 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, oh turn it off
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2015 6:44:00 PM
Thank you very much...Tim
Date: 4/21/2015 5:49:00 PM
this is just beautiful, tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/21/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Ilene....it is a lovely dream...Tim
Date: 4/21/2015 5:26:00 PM
beautiful imagery sooo romantic Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Jan...have a beautiful night Tim
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