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Dreams No Bite Left In Life

DREAMS Many nuances – in the faces of my Children – come to me in the night. In multi coloured – shaded shadows of dreams – they come to light. They – in their histories journey – show me the way of free flight, a flight into what this soul has already come to know, so long ago - long before – on the screen – it came to show where it is , we come from, where it is we are bound to go. No Bite left in Life These tired old eyes of mine - no longer have teeth. They no longer chow down – from above or beneath, all that youthful, younger eyes - full of that precious heat – devour with such passion and agility, a mental feat capable of, by souls and spirits filled with divine nourishment while I, in a black hole, lost to the dark firmament, live, within my hunger, starving in my blindness for a taste of all the beauties and all the kindness they so graciously and generously sent my way while I , without ever attempting to repay for more than has come, on wings, to me. I think I now know ?, I think I now can see ? B. J. “A ” 2 November 1st 2002

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Date: 4/10/2014 10:01:00 AM
I absolutely love this...awesome awesome flow!! It reads so seamlessly!
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/11/2014 11:46:00 AM
Good morning Pace INK-U-SCRIPT : Once again, I am flattered by the time you have taken to read my stuff, by the interest you have expressed, Pace INK-U-SCRIPT. I am forever grateful for your glowing comments, especially after reading some of your poetry. Coming from one as proficient, elegant, eloquent, talented, knowledgeable, and educated as you, I am awed by your perceptions and expressions, as regards to my feeble attempts at the table of bards. It gives me the courage to believe and accept that I might be doing something right even though I know not what I do or how to do it. Sometimes I wonder if I am not just a conduit ?, carrying from the beyond, that which my fourth cousin ( the Poetess, E. Pauline Johnson )gave to this world, Kings and Queens, Presidents and Prime ministers, the social elite and the common man as she traveled these great lands and abroad . Thank you again, Pace INK-U-SCRIPT . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )
Date: 4/9/2014 2:59:00 PM
"No Bite Left in Life" I'm sure you have plenty of bite. hang in there! nice read
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 4/9/2014 3:59:00 PM
My Dear Kira Price : Thank you once again Kira, ( somewhere in the centre part of this continent ? ) for the time you have spent reading and the time you have taken to comment on my stuff. Truly appreciated !!! As for “ "No Bite Left in Life" ” I have “ hang in there! ” and have had a couple of moments ( English, Polish, Chinese, African American ) during these past twelve years - since that poem was written - to suck the life out of life’s light, and it’s many shades, the light that has permeated the darkness of many a day. B. J. “A” 2

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