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Dreams Drift As Time Sweeps Away

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A moment of tranquil repose, breathing in whispers of sounds and dreams at nature's ethereal doorstep. Quote _by Poet I gaze towards the sky, Among the snow white clouds, And autumn sun, Watching all the birds' flyby. With outstretched wings Flying so high, soaring Into the vast horizon. As I sit on the rock cliff A calm hazy white blanket Sea and sweet air; A dreamlike atmosphere Of harmony and tranquility, Beguiles, just extremely unreal. Whispers of sounds and dreams Drift as time sweeps away. With cold shivers Running up my spine Staring at the shadowy Woodland and vast horizon. It seems so surreal. Taking a breath And sighing deeply Brushing against Nature's ethereal doorstep, From sun rising at dawn, Until twilight seductive night. I close my eyes and create A unique imaginary Art inspired surrounding, Losing myself in its trancelike Quiet serenity Of the bluish sky fading away Unseen into blissful fantasy dreams. 5/23/2021 Poetry Contest: Writing Prompt - Dreamlike Sponsored by: Constance La France dreamlike surreal unreal hazy imaginary shadowy ethereal trancelike

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Date: 6/7/2021 4:29:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve! Fantastic imagery and leaves one feeling peaceful. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve, you deserve it with an amazing write. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 6/3/2021 1:02:00 PM
Eve -Congratulations on your win - an amazing picture - you have captured this moment with a wonderful word picture poem - David
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Date: 6/3/2021 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on your win with this magical poem. Your images and description of the ethereal surrounding, takes me to the dreamlike rock cliff. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:03:00 PM
Eve, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image and your quote, love - Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 11:58:00 AM
Great Inspiration. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:00:00 AM
The lovely photo may have inspired your poem or you may have chosen it after you composed it, but either way it melds beautifully with your wonderful entry Eve. Your niece sure took a fantastic photo. I love your quote too. A masterful piece my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:32:00 AM
Wow! Sure to do well in the contest, Eve
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Date: 5/24/2021 1:52:00 AM
Wow. A lovely poem that I'm sure it will rate high. I posted mine, but it's complicated.
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