Dreams and Things

Staring up at the ceiling floor

As the big hand on the clock

Races past one

Hearing the mouse rouse out of his
 
Long sleep

To gather tidbits and play

While the pussycat full belly and all

Lounges blissfully counting mice

Feeling a drop of sweat on my brow

As the fan turns upside down

Not day dreaming at night silly

Just dreaming today

A sunny Beautiful day

In...December

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/18/2015 5:07:00 PM
Tony, I liked this. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Cynthia Jones
Date: 4/20/2015 5:56:00 PM
You are most welcome. :O) *S* Cynthia
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/18/2015 5:21:00 PM
Cynthia thank you for your positive and you're always welcomed comments, much respect and admiration..always tonytocaa
Date: 4/2/2015 12:03:00 PM
Nice...light poetry...I've tried this only once. You have a good hand at this. Limericks are fun too...
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Date: 4/2/2015 12:12:00 PM
Hey Kim,Believe it or not I have to push myself to do these types of poetry for whatever reason,The other ones the flow come easier..part of my weave..in and out lol..thanks palante..tonytocaa
Date: 2/5/2015 11:05:00 AM
Really enjoyed your poem Tony can't wait to read the rest. Very nice.
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Janet,for visiting and enjoying my poetry means a lot ..hugs to you tonytocaa
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