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Dreams

I looked up at a 
partially cloudy blue sky 
remember childhood
lie down upon the green grass
daydreams fill the warm spring air

dreamtanka

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Delice Arleen Skelly

February 2, 2022 at 8:09 AM

Hello Sara, looking forward to Spring now. I brought two bunches of daffodils the other day…really uplifting…Delice

Sara Kendrick

February 2, 2022 at 2:29 PM

Delice, Yes, the beautiful colors of deep yellows, pale yellows, and some orange have a drawing effect. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

January 30, 2022 at 1:20 PM

A creative well crafted Tanka Sara my friend such a beautifully traquil scene you depict Hugs and blessings. Jennifer

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2022 at 4:15 AM

Why, thank you, Jennifer. Your presence at my page is always inspiring. Sara

Mulu Magdalinos

January 26, 2022 at 11:28 PM

What a beautiful poem,alive memories ,Sara.

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2022 at 4:11 AM

Mulu, Thank you. I can feel those memories sometimes. Sara

Valsa George

January 26, 2022 at 8:21 PM

Going back to the good old days is always a pleasure when we had not a care to bother us . It was a time we had the clear sky above and the grassy land below and we floated weightless between them. Lovely....

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2022 at 4:09 AM

Valsa, Yes, that was a good time in most youth's life. Thanks for the visit and sharing your happy thoughts about those years when most of us did not have to grow up. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf

January 26, 2022 at 4:26 PM

Perhaps you too, Sara, were fascinated by clouds, as I was during childhood... Almost as fascinating now too (sometimes, anyway). ~ Not getting older; getting better! :)

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2022 at 4:03 AM

Gershon, Yes, I am fascinated by clouds, how they float, when they are low how they feel that feeling of like taking a very mild shower in cold water. I like their shapes that can constantly change sometimes fast and sometimes slow. Your visits to my page always inspire. Sara

Alexis Y.

January 26, 2022 at 3:05 PM

Hi Sara, It’s was good you were able to witness the beauty of nature and reflect on a good memory in your childhood. Well done. Have a great day-Alexis

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2022 at 3:56 AM

Alexis, Sometimes reflecting on the good helps to face the bad and get it out. Thanks for your kind review. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Sotto Poet

January 25, 2022 at 6:03 PM

Sara, it's beautiful to be able to reflect on those formative years. Time is fastly fading.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 2:15 PM

Lasaad, I think it is fading faster than we know. Thanks for your supportive comment. Sara

Barry Stebbings

January 25, 2022 at 12:06 PM

A bed of green grass and a blue sky - what more could one wish for. Nicely done. // Barry

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 2:13 PM

Barry, For once in my life that would have been enough, alas, those days went with the way of the tornado. Thanks for the visit. Your comments are always supportive. Sara

Rico Leffanta

January 25, 2022 at 10:57 AM

Nothing like the scent of spring grass before the dogs piss on it . . . .Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 2:10 PM

Rico, Back long, long ago when I was a child, I don't think there was as many dogs as there are today. LOL..Thanks. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

January 25, 2022 at 9:04 AM

Spring dreams are the best. Lovely poem.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 2:07 PM

Why, thank you, Victor. I thought that I just dreamed that. Sara

Vijay Pandit

January 25, 2022 at 5:39 AM

A delightful daydream you wrote, Sara. Much enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 9:12 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara

Tom Cunningham

January 25, 2022 at 4:55 AM

It's lovely to look back on those times of our youth Sara. Where does time go. Tom

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2022 at 4:43 AM

Tom, Your review of my work is encouraging. I spent my time, but I am not sure if I spent it wisely. It has slipped through my hands. I hope that I can wisely use what is left. Thank you for dropping by. Sara

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