Dream-Like Silhouette

There is a mystic hint of endearment
In watching you through shadows ,
Like observing a diaphanous river
As it  meanders its way down the bend;
Past reeds and grasses on a foggy edge
To somewhere new  and therefore lightly seen.

The delicate, steady throb from your  glide
Moves through  cycles of my  lulled vision
Bringing respite from your otherworld's form
Sailing on  an air of unconsciousness
And pulling that filmy silhouette 
Down , down to a ripple of celestial dreams .

I relish  intangible thoughts about you
Flowing gently into me.   You drift quiet, still :
Those ethereal whispers bidding me closer
Like the rivulet which beckons 
Through your movement in it's veiled outline.


Silhouette Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish
9/15/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Congrats, Nette, on POTD!!
Fleming Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 4:46 PM
A very charming piece of poetry, Nette...as smooth and as unruffled as the gliding waters of your "Diaphanous river" -- most elegant! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Fleming Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 4:46 PM
A very charming piece of poetry, Nette...as smooth and as unruffled as the gliding waters of your "Diaphanous river" -- most elegant! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations on POTD :) Eve ~`*
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:13 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win, Nette ... Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in the contest with this outstanding write
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 1:13 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Nette !!!
Cornish Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:36 PM
Your words flow so easily Nette that I almost see you existing in this world wonderfully dreamy and flowing peacefully. There were inspired writes, yours among them as always.
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:11 PM
I looked for another word to describe this, Nette, but "Beautiful" it is and "Lovely," too. "I relish intangible thoughts about you flowing gently into me."
Ja Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Words crafted with beauty and grace. A truly gifted write. Deserving to be in this place. Congratulations.
Danda Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Great poem indeed
Smith Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Your words are so very lovely Nette, they flow like lyrics. Congratulations for POTD honors, well derived...
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Very beautifully crafted nette congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Truly amazing write Nette, so deserving of POTD. Good luck in the contest, a winner in my eyes already....Maria xx
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:13 AM
WOWZA...what a way to open the day. A cup of Joe and a silhouetted dream. Way to go Nette!!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:08 AM
Wonderful piece Nette, dreamy, you got my vote :)
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Returning with Congrats nette!
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 7:12 AM
- Oh Nette, delicate and beautiful - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Beautifully stated my friend...a dreamy Silhouette for sure...a winner in my court...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Your words flow like a waterfall and description leaves me standing in the middle admiring . Good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Beautiful words carefully crafted as always--lovely poem nette!
Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:29 PM
Every carefully chosen word of every artistically written line is pure poetic bliss. Your poem is the perfect expression of your title - quite lovely and beautiful Nette. Good luck in the contest.
Parker Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 4:16 PM
the picture painted here was like looking through a veil tethered to a dream..good luck
Sivey Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:59 PM
This is gorgeous, quite the masterful write here my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your creative and gentle poem here this afternoon. This poem in of itself is a delicate piece, a delightful write to have been expressed so perfectly! Great Work!!
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