Ms Affection Poet Rhyme

Dreamland

Gently rocking you fast asleep
No sudden moves or you would leap
Watching your tiny face aglow
Eyes getting heavy to sleep you go
Back and forth i rock in the chair
Hold you close, in your face i stare
So precious you are and loved by me
When you awake, right here I'll be

March 7th, 2021

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Jennifer Fenn March 8, 2022 at 1:29 PM Such love expressed! Sweet poem!

I Am Anaya March 5, 2022 at 12:36 PM A precious gift from God, lovely poem

Franci Hoffman March 4, 2022 at 7:33 AM What a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Ms Affection.

Beryl Edmonds March 4, 2022 at 12:41 AM So beautiful, precious moments rocking one’s baby asleep, lovely… Belle

Jo Chamberlain March 4, 2022 at 12:25 AM How lovely. I remember those days well. I honestly thought my neck was going to be stuck from the amount of time I spent just looking at my baby. Who is now 13. :-)

Anju Sarath April 9, 2021 at 9:00 AM It touched me so much as I am having a 7 month old baby now... Keep going

Mahtab Bangalee April 8, 2021 at 9:23 PM just I can say- it's beautiful writings

Regina Mcintosh March 12, 2021 at 6:31 AM I love this. It's adorable. God Bless you and congrats on your win. Love, Gina Ms Affection March 17, 2021 at 1:31 PM Im floored and honored. Thus is my 1st poem EVER in a public forum. Thanks for the encouragement

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 3:00 AM - So sweet, Ms Affection :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2021 at 2:49 AM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Evelyn Swartz March 11, 2021 at 11:06 PM That is a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved win

Beata Agustin March 11, 2021 at 9:54 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Carol Mitra March 11, 2021 at 4:51 PM Exactly what I would do with my kids....Congrats on you win Ms Affection :)

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 2:18 PM This is absolutely delightful , many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 2:07 PM Beautiful nursery rhyme, with perfect flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win.

Sam Kauffman March 11, 2021 at 1:24 PM A lovely lullaby. Perfect for a nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your top win!

Beryl Edmonds March 11, 2021 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on the top spot in the contest. A lovely nursery rhyme that could be sung as a lullaby. Belle

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 1:09 PM WoW! This is the perfect entry for a nursery rhyme contest. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2021 at 12:58 PM Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" This would be wonderful on a card. Have a blessed day...................