Dreamland

Gently rocking you fast asleep
No sudden moves or you would leap
Watching your tiny face aglow
Eyes getting heavy to sleep you go
Back and forth i rock in the chair
Hold you close, in your face i stare
So precious you are and loved by me
When you awake, right here I'll be

March 7th, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/8/2022 1:29:00 PM
Such love expressed! Sweet poem!
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Date: 3/5/2022 12:36:00 PM
A precious gift from God, lovely poem
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Date: 3/4/2022 7:33:00 AM
What a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Ms Affection.
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Date: 3/4/2022 12:41:00 AM
So beautiful, precious moments rocking one’s baby asleep, lovely… Belle
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Date: 3/4/2022 12:25:00 AM
How lovely. I remember those days well. I honestly thought my neck was going to be stuck from the amount of time I spent just looking at my baby. Who is now 13. :-)
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Date: 4/9/2021 9:00:00 AM
It touched me so much as I am having a 7 month old baby now... Keep going
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Date: 4/8/2021 9:23:00 PM
just I can say- it's beautiful writings
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Date: 3/12/2021 6:31:00 AM
I love this. It's adorable. God Bless you and congrats on your win. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/17/2021 1:31:00 PM
Im floored and honored. Thus is my 1st poem EVER in a public forum. Thanks for the encouragement
Date: 3/12/2021 3:00:00 AM
- So sweet, Ms Affection :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2021 2:49:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/11/2021 11:06:00 PM
That is a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved win
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Date: 3/11/2021 9:54:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 3/11/2021 4:51:00 PM
Exactly what I would do with my kids....Congrats on you win Ms Affection :)
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Date: 3/11/2021 2:18:00 PM
This is absolutely delightful , many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2021 2:07:00 PM
Beautiful nursery rhyme, with perfect flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:24:00 PM
A lovely lullaby. Perfect for a nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the top spot in the contest. A lovely nursery rhyme that could be sung as a lullaby. Belle
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:09:00 PM
WoW! This is the perfect entry for a nursery rhyme contest. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2021 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" This would be wonderful on a card. Have a blessed day...................
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