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Dreamland- An African Woman's wish

I'm in my dreamland I wish I don't wake It's here you look at me It's here your smile I see It's here I get your hug It's here I'm not a bug Blissful romantic tune Lost in lust, high in the moon Love life like Mills and Boon I'm so not waking up soon I'm in my dreamland If I dare wake I'll be back to dreams and bleak I'll be back to hide and seek I'll be back to hate and dread I'll be back to beg your bread I'm still in my dreamland But I'm wide awake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 4/28/2014 8:34:00 AM
I love the melody in this fine write...Awesome feeling I get while reading..enjoyed!
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Date: 2/6/2014 12:01:00 AM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. Will you be back to submit more poetry? I'll be back to read and see.
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Chidiogo Ibe
Date: 2/11/2014 1:01:00 AM
Thanks Robert. I look forward to reading yours too
Date: 2/5/2014 6:09:00 PM
Everything about your poem is amazing Chidiog.... Enjoyed... Hope you find a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup, and find a liking to this community, many of us here are like a happy family. (With Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/5/2014 12:48:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Chidiogo- I choose your first lovely Dreamland poem- hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2014 11:25:00 AM
Chidiogo, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:29:00 AM
Ps., This Is Beautiful!
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:27:00 AM
† When I Was Around Nineteen Years Of Age, Having Never Been With A Lady Of The Night Before ˜ There Was This Beautiful African\American Girl About Twenty-Five And Caremel Her Complextion: So Extremely Beautiful! I Was A Pretty Fair Child Back Then Myself And She Was Very Loving To Me....Love John
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 2/5/2014 9:37:00 AM
Althoug I haven't been with Her ladies of the night since I was twenty-one yet still, She and this other Beautiful brunette in San Antonio my last, were Treasures. Although again I have only been with such three times in my life, the other in South Carolins, Columbia when I was nineteen again. But, the girl mentioned in this comment was the only one I ever saw again; three times back then in the seventy's