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Dreaming in Ink

Acquiesced amongst gypsy stardust,
      dance of aroused blissfulness 
 knees went weak mid a zealously flirtatious
   sunset, as skies intensity was enraptured
      mid fierce moonbeam's caressing zeal, 
fulfilling a wickedly wild aching surrender
      within ardor's aroused captivation,
enthralling enchantingly obscure sunrise
   sensations of endmost satiated fervency,
  shorelines met heavens verve
     breathless in exhalations' celestial passion,
 chanted to the gods 'tween fiery escapism
     risen above darkly inclined constellations,
        'til consummated resplendence of night
            burst forth in explosive exaltation
              dreamt of ink's splendiferous poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/6/2017 7:55:00 AM
I'm glad I read this one a thoughtful piece.
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Date: 12/24/2016 3:17:00 AM
Left me wondering what about, but none the less it is an inspiring write and an interesting poem. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/21/2016 10:20:00 AM
That is incredible so splendidly written 777! if you don't mind I would like to put this into my favs.
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Date: 12/8/2016 11:45:00 PM
Simply great, Paloma:)
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Date: 12/8/2016 5:15:00 PM
Oh wow, fabulous...I just saw Chris's echo
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Date: 11/29/2016 11:36:00 PM
Wow. I think I am dribbling. You write faster than I can read. Thank you for the kind comments on mine. I was sort of hoping you would read Punctuated inTime. I am so proud of it being ranked.
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Date: 11/25/2016 8:49:00 PM
Think in ink! Was drawn to the title of this one! 'Chanted to the gods' indeed! Outstanding as usual, Paloma.
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Date: 11/25/2016 7:53:00 PM
Yes, a splendid explosion of gorgeous splendiferous poetry this is. It's so cool to write poems ABOUT poetry itself!
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Date: 11/25/2016 8:47:00 AM
What a cool title. :) Once again, a dream is a dream but not an ordinary dream when I come to your page. Sleeping or awake, when you dream in ink, we all dream and what a wonderful dream it is. This was enchantingly beautiful and so nice to see the gypsy pen wielding it's blooms once again.
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Date: 11/24/2016 11:25:00 PM
"dreamt of ink's splendiferous poetry" I love this, Paloma, Imagism yes, but really, all of your poems have that powerful imagery.
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Date: 11/24/2016 2:05:00 PM
such flowery words that enhance the glow of your work, your ink, paloma... enjoyed.. huggs
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Date: 11/24/2016 10:28:00 AM
What beautiful imagery - as I've come to expect from you, I am required to think, digest each word when I read you and I love that because each line is not found wanting after being processed, but found glowing in imagery matching feelings I have been unable to express. Once digested, I went back, re-read and felt myself dance and twirl thru the lines ... thank you for that, happy turkey day ... CayCay
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Date: 11/24/2016 9:58:00 AM
”Dreaming in ink” covers a world entire: ”breathless in exhalations' celestial passion”. This is a great imagism.
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Date: 11/24/2016 9:37:00 AM
You write with passion and a creative mind, Paloma. You truly are a breath of fresh air! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/24/2016 8:12:00 AM
My kneees go weak reading your poetry, Paloma. Great job as usual:) Happy Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:26:00 AM
I love that gypsy stardust and celestial passion too.Such a fantastic poem...Happy Thanksgiving day dear.
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