Dreaming Awake

impish promises
reminisce to wish
for your kiss upon
my foolish heart
that meanders
perfectly unaware
obliviously blind
to the stargazing Cherub's prayer
eating the lotus flowers in your hair

guileless and moonfaced 
a simpleton I am
like peanut butter to jam
I glue to you and blend
my foolish heart to lend
to the innocence of wonder that begins
as I read your storybook without knowing
where to look for the end
I linger to vanish and conceal
with the enchantment that steals
my foolish heart

January 11, 2021

My Foolish Heart Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish
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Richards Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:35 PM
I love the line :guileless and moonfaced", which is what love will often do to foolish lovers. Wonderful poem, Lonna. Congrats to you!
Blodgett Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Carrie. Truly appreciate your comment!
Kauffman Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Lonna, you had me at reminiscing promises! Congratulations on your win! Wonderful phrases "innocence of wonder." All the best to you.
Blodgett Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Sam, really enjoy your comments!
La France Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Lonna, congratulations on your win in Craig's Foolish Heart contest with this wonderful poem _Constance
Blodgett Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thank you very much Constance. Love when you comment.
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