Dreaming

In my dreams I am A queen with a verdant thumb My garden grows joy.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/15/2019 7:00:00 AM

A wonderful gift you have--enjoyed reading your poem.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay.

James Horn

Date: 1/15/2019 2:30:00 AM

Seems like Horn haiku to me. Must thrust myself through crust after I Do bust to dust.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2019 6:51:00 AM

Ooh great compliment; that's high praise, thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2019 10:07:00 PM

Ah, lovely senryu, and I imagine I would love to see photos of your garden, my friend. Maybe not today.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2019 6:53:00 AM

No, not today, today it's soggy and limp. I can hardly wait till the tulips, irises and paper whites start blooming in the spring. I've also got a bunch of roses, bluebells and grape hyacinth's so, when the next litter of bunnies come hopping through next Spring, I'll have some lovely watercolors to do. Thanks again.