Dreaming- Spanish Huitain Style

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~Dreaming~ (Spanish Huitain) Dreaming the impossible not a crime You can do it don't make it hard Many mountains there are to climb But it is your choice you hold card Be bold and just hold your ground You will make it right to the top Sooner or later you'll get reward Don't give up never dreaming stop. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 March.4.2015

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Anna Hopper

Date: 3/9/2015 7:29:00 AM

Excellent and inspirational! I love poems about chasing your dreams/reaching goals! Very true and a great reminder!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/13/2015 9:25:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Anna , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2015 1:14:00 PM

how uplifting is this, dorian... much enjoyed on a positive note!.. huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/7/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Nette , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) Hugs! D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/4/2015 11:38:00 AM

A great message D xxx love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/4/2015 2:38:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Rajat , for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/4/2015 11:01:00 AM

You are very positive, Dorian. We have to hold on to our dreams. We can make most of them come true, but we also have to be patient. Hugs // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/4/2015 2:34:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Paul, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're always so sweet, kind and wise Paul, and I know you're right. Thanks again for you words of encouragement they mean a lot to me :)Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :)D.