Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Dreamers of Dreams-A 360 Double Helix Reversible

Dreamers of Dreams

Incongruous realities of microcosmic minds
Torturous awakenings in lives raging reminds
Dormant and deceived are rapid eyes moving
Absorbent are neurons firing fluidly brewing
~
Images living through altered consciousness
Stages changing forever falling bottomless
Distortions within space of timeless events
Portions parallel admits mysterious segments
~
Death opening doors amongst dreams coming
Breath filled Angels of harmonics humming
Creation awaits upon celestial sailing seas
Imagination of paths through eternal keys.



...in reverse


Imagination of paths through eternal keys
Creation awaits upon celestial sailing seas
Breath filled Angels of harmonics humming
Death opening doors amongst dreams coming
~
Portions parallel admits mysterious segments
Distortions within space of timeless events
Stages changing forever falling bottomless
Images living through altered consciousness
~
Absorbent are neurons firing fluidly brewing
Dormant and deceived are rapid eyes moving
Torturous awakenings in lives raging reminds
Incongruous realities of microcosmic minds.



...in reverse and backward



Dreams of Dreamers

Keys eternal through paths of imagination
Seas sailing celestial upon awaits creation
Humming harmonics of Angels filled breath
Coming dreams amongst doors opening death
~
Segments mysterious admits parallel portions
Events timeless of space within distortions
Bottomless falling forever changing stages
Consciousness altered through living images
~
Brewing fluidly firing neurons are absorbent
Moving eyes rapid are deceived and dormant
Reminds raging lives in awakenings torturous
Minds microcosmic of realities incongruous.



Aug.28.2018
Winged Warrior...^WW^
Not for any contest


This poem is dedicated to my dear friend Silent One...in response to the recent passing of his Grandfather...and to my Mom, who passed away last Oct...may they always live in our dreams...

...I don't know if this form exists or if it's even acceptable...but is very challenging and fun...just for the heck of it...I'm calling it...a 360 Double Helix Reversible...if you have another title, please soup mail me...love & light... ^WW^

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Carole Duet September 3, 2018 at 1:17 PM Wow! Such an unusual and interesting way to express those poetic thoughts and dreams, ^WW^. I really enjoyed reading this/all.

Brandy Nicole August 30, 2018 at 10:32 PM Oh my! You have created a masterpiece!! Your thoughts hold many emotions- forward, backward and in reverse as well. Upside-down, if that is way. No matter the design, your words touch the heart. I am so sorry for your loss. Such a beautiful dedication to Silent One and his grandfather as well. Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina August 30, 2018 at 2:12 PM What an amazing write, WW you are a master of poetry my friend. This is also a wonderful tribute to Silent One's grandfather and to your mother. I am so sorry for both of your losses - my condolences to all my good friend. Shine on...Charlie

M. L. Kiser August 30, 2018 at 1:17 PM Well done, I had to favorite this one. I'm not sure of what it is, either but, I like the imagery and flow that's presented here. An amazing read that I enjoyed.

Besma Riabi Dziri August 30, 2018 at 10:17 AM That's what life is all about.. stages.. harsh realities.. limited minds.. raging memories.. sailing on journeys of mystery.. death awaiting.. Great work of creative writing Winged Warrior! A FAV. You are raising high the voice of poetry and the pulse of Humanity! Long live your friendship and keep shining on the path of poetry.. be blessed always.

Joanna Daniel August 30, 2018 at 2:31 AM An amazingly superb write, ^WW^, no one can beat this:)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton August 29, 2018 at 3:14 PM hmmmm, a deep dive swim into the chapter of WW. Love this, it's amazing what can be seen on the other side of a mirror when you reverse the words. Exceptionally talented writer you are. Stellar mind. Leanne Lovejoy-Burton August 29, 2018 at 3:19 PM and much love and deepest condolences to Silent and family and to yourself WW. Such a good friend you are and such a lovely thought to the life of a much loved grandfather and to your much loved mother. They are always with you.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 29, 2018 at 10:51 AM Well it takes dexterity and courage to venture to lands unknown but as Nietzsche said " Better to write your own things that to write about things others have written! " OUTSTANDING! I would never attempt something like that for I am not that skilled!

John Hamilton August 29, 2018 at 10:49 AM Masterful writing WW, it's a testament to a very creative mind, I marvel at your talent dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2018 at 10:08 AM Wow! And you not only created your own version of a reversible poem, you honored Silent One and your mother, who is smiling down from Heaven right now blowing you kisses and wrapping her arms around her son during his sleep.

Nette Onclaud August 28, 2018 at 2:42 PM way out of the ballpark; so original and moving, WW... i send my condolences on the passing of your mother... stay well and huggs

Sand Blown August 28, 2018 at 1:43 PM "...microcosmic minds...in space of timeless events..." it is truly amazing how much goes on in a micromind that is less than a speck of nothing in the vast universe

Agnes Krampe August 28, 2018 at 11:24 AM an impressive tour de force, ^WW^. I am sorry about your loss.

Heidi Sands August 28, 2018 at 8:04 AM This is outstanding WW! It must have been very challenging, yet you accomplished it. You are always a master at rhyming. Well done :)