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Dreamer

"Dreamer" Lying awake again another lonely night like always im wrong and you're always right what more can i do what more can i say to make you stop treating me this way i want you to love me the way that i love you i wish u could feel all that i would do i want to be happy i wish we could go back to when we first felt the love that we now lack i would give anything if we could make it right but thats all up to you but all you wanna do is fight I guess im just a dreamer dreaming away wanting us to be happy when will i see that day yeah a dreamer on a dream that wont come true GOD please help me show me what to do Why do i hang on why cant i let go with everything you keep puting me through that ill never know i guess im just hoping that one day you'd finally see the faith and love i have for you that i wish you had for me will i live like this forever will a single promise ever come true will i live my whole life just sitting here waiting hoping ill finally have you i guess thats why im a dreamer just dreaming of that day dreaming for a lifetime that seems fo far away dreaming of the happy life i thought that we could live i dont know what else to do or what more that i can give maybe this is just a life that wasnt meant to be cause if my happy ending is a dream i guess my dream will set me free... I'M A DREAMER!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 7/21/2016 3:52:00 PM
Danielle, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:08:00 PM
Nothing wrong with dreaming, but your poem shows us that sometimes it is nothing but a dream. Dreams can set you free, but they can also enthrall us to no end, and some times it is better not to be a dreamer. Your poem made me think of a few crushes I had as kid and how I would of done anything for those dreams to come true, but now I am with my dream. Just hold on to what you have and live the dreams, but they pop out from the weirdest places as well.
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:49:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Danielle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:15:00 PM
A fine write :-)
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Danielle Hunter
Date: 1/11/2012 12:17:00 PM
thank you very much. i have lots more i will upload later. keep watch for them and let me know what you think.

Book: Shattered Sighs