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Dreamer

"Dreamer"


Lying awake again
another lonely night
like always im wrong
and you're always right 
what more can i do
what more can i say
to make you stop 
treating me this way
i want you to love me
the way that i love you
i wish u could feel 
all that i would do
i want to be happy
i wish we could go back
to when we first felt the love
that we now lack
i would give anything
if we could make it right
but thats all up to you
but all you wanna do is fight
I guess im just a dreamer
dreaming away
wanting us to be happy
when will i see that day
yeah a dreamer
on a dream that wont come true
GOD please help me
show me what to do
Why do i hang on 
why cant i let go
with everything you keep puting me through
that ill never know
i guess im just hoping 
that one day you'd finally see
the faith and love i have for you
that i wish you had for me
will i live like this forever 
will a single promise ever come true
will i live my whole life just sitting here waiting
hoping ill finally have you
i guess thats why im a dreamer
just dreaming of that day
dreaming for a lifetime 
that seems fo far away
dreaming of the happy life 
i thought that we could live
i dont know what else to do 
or what more that i can give
maybe this is just a life 
that wasnt meant to be
cause if my happy ending is a dream
i guess my dream will set me free...
I'M A DREAMER!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/21/2016 3:52:00 PM
Danielle, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:08:00 PM
Nothing wrong with dreaming, but your poem shows us that sometimes it is nothing but a dream. Dreams can set you free, but they can also enthrall us to no end, and some times it is better not to be a dreamer. Your poem made me think of a few crushes I had as kid and how I would of done anything for those dreams to come true, but now I am with my dream. Just hold on to what you have and live the dreams, but they pop out from the weirdest places as well.
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:49:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Danielle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:15:00 PM
A fine write :-)
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Danielle Hunter
Date: 1/11/2012 12:17:00 PM
thank you very much. i have lots more i will upload later. keep watch for them and let me know what you think.

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