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A dreamcatcher or dream catcher is a Native American craftwork consisting of a hoop covered with string, yarn or horsehair mesh creating a web and decorated with feathers and beads and believed to give its owner good dreams, trapping the bad dreams.
Dreamcatcher blowing, guard me while I dream! My nightmare g r o w i n g and soon I will scream, ghosts you will be slowing, G H O S T S I have seen; DEMONS, please be throwing- my dream extreme! Sweetness- be f l o w i n g- send me a moonbeam; I want only dreams GLOWING- and supreme! ___________________ April 28, 2017 Monorhyme/"Dreamcatcher" Copyright Protected, ID 896206 Rhymers Delight, Internal Rhyme, Monorhyme -2 John Hamilton

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Date: 4/29/2017 8:24:00 AM
This is a lovely monorhyme, Constance:)
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Date: 4/29/2017 5:40:00 AM
Nicely written, B.W. I like the pace and flow expressing the slightly panicky feeling in a ghost dream. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry.
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Date: 4/28/2017 4:25:00 PM
ohh, a beauty dear constance.. soupie and huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2017 7:10:00 PM
Nette thanks for visiting my poem and for the beauty.
Date: 4/28/2017 12:33:00 PM
Really nicely done my friend. This feels good to read, the flow is melodic. Best wishes in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2017 7:11:00 PM
Chris thanks for dropping by and for the compliment.

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