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Dream Weaver Damsel

"Dream Weaver Damsel" in a tiny corner beyond mysterious hills a quaint curio shoppe promised exotic thrills amid cryptic designs whispered brisk Autumn chills as the marmalade sunset cautioned while pursuing frills ... misty clouds had invited as curiosity excited I entered dusty door of my own free will. melodies chanted a pleasant, yet haunting refrain as a slight pungent odor infused by wolf bane the proprietess welcomed with a silver head cane at her side was a midnight blue giant great dane ... a charming confection a cozy connection i wandered in amazement to purchase sculptured frame. she offered a sweet tea from a boiling cauldron tin suddenly the silence invaded quiet as a pin this euphoria feeling tasted tempting as sin while spraying wild essence which appeared from a bin ... a mystical trance fashioned vivid romance I envisioned a breath of intoxicant gin. floating through space on invisible wings seeking to escape from perilous things trying to seize the illusive brass rings as I started to weep I heard two lovebirds sing ... dream sequence is over awake! smell fresh clover was my dream a prediction? premonition? or warning? *For SandyIvy Davis's Good Enough Contest. *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S..

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Date: 3/13/2014 2:28:00 AM
loving each one of your poems~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/1/2012 2:25:00 PM
Hi, Linda, I wonder if I had seen this one before. It looks vaguely familiar to me. anyway, congrats on it making another winners' list. It works very well with Autumn and Halloween themes as well.
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:50:00 PM
Wonderful poem here Linda!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:27:00 AM
This is a great write my dear friend Linda-M! I love it! My hearty congratulations on your win! love/hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:53:00 PM
WON IN CONTST .. THANKXXX ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:15:00 PM
Very eloquent and beautiful Congratulations on a great write Linda Marie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:25:00 PM
Hi LInda, my sweet bff... .. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 7:18:00 PM
:-) love your good win' Sandy
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Date: 10/8/2012 9:02:00 PM
Really enjoyed this poem, loved the descriptions "Marmalade sunset" ... so nice. Well done and congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:23:00 PM
Oh my LOL I thought it was like Love Potion Number 9!! Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:25:00 PM
She bent down and turned around and gave me a wink./She said, "I'm gonna mix it up right here in the sink."/It smelled like turpentine and looked like India Ink./I held my nose, I closed my eyes, I took a drink.
Date: 10/8/2012 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "In Dreams" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2012 10:51:00 AM
You always find just the very most descriptive words for all of your poems. This one is exceptionally replete with them. Beautiful. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/8/2012 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful dream-poem.
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Date: 10/8/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's dream contest.
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Date: 10/8/2012 5:25:00 AM
a wonderful poem with such an interesting rhyme scheme. i thoroughly enjoyed it and congratulate you on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 10/8/2012 3:14:00 AM
You have the most creative talented mind Linda. I always enjoy your poetry and this is a winner. Congratulations to you dear.
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:07:00 PM
Linda, my sweet bff, a wonderful win in Francine Roberts, "In dream" contest. Enjoyed all her winners, love PD
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Date: 10/7/2012 8:46:00 PM
WON 5TH PLACE .. THANKXXX
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Date: 10/7/2012 5:31:00 PM
I can see why this one placed higher in the contest than mine. Congratulations on your win. I'm placing this one in my favorites.
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:11:00 PM
you always amaze me that you can use so many flowery and expressive words but never lose track of the theme, a delight to read as usual, congrats on your win Linda Marie
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:07:00 PM
congrats friend Linda-Marie for this superb write...(^_^)
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Date: 9/21/2012 2:34:00 AM
looking pretty damn good babe...
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:16:00 AM
wow, it is so good to have you back, sweetheart, this is awesome way beyond my vocabulary, so i will say.. i love everything about this poem, and it's writter, Hi Ron, you have a gem there
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