Dream Weaver Damsel

"Dream Weaver Damsel" in a tiny corner beyond mysterious hills a quaint curio shoppe promised exotic thrills amid cryptic designs whispered brisk Autumn chills as the marmalade sunset cautioned while pursuing frills ... misty clouds had invited as curiosity excited I entered dusty door of my own free will. melodies chanted a pleasant, yet haunting refrain as a slight pungent odor infused by wolf bane the proprietess welcomed with a silver head cane at her side was a midnight blue giant great dane ... a charming confection a cozy connection i wandered in amazement to purchase sculptured frame. she offered a sweet tea from a boiling cauldron tin suddenly the silence invaded quiet as a pin this euphoria feeling tasted tempting as sin while spraying wild essence which appeared from a bin ... a mystical trance fashioned vivid romance I envisioned a breath of intoxicant gin. floating through space on invisible wings seeking to escape from perilous things trying to seize the illusive brass rings as I started to weep I heard two lovebirds sing ... dream sequence is over awake! smell fresh clover was my dream a prediction? premonition? or warning? *For SandyIvy Davis's Good Enough Contest. *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S..
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:28 AM
loving each one of your poems~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Hi, Linda, I wonder if I had seen this one before. It looks vaguely familiar to me. anyway, congrats on it making another winners' list. It works very well with Autumn and Halloween themes as well.
Poet Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Wonderful poem here Linda!Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:27 AM
This is a great write my dear friend Linda-M! I love it! My hearty congratulations on your win! love/hugs:)LG
Brown Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 10:53 PM
WON IN CONTST .. THANKXXX ..
Johnson Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 10:15 PM
Very eloquent and beautiful Congratulations on a great write Linda Marie. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Hi LInda, my sweet bff... .. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD
Ivy D Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 7:18 PM
:-) love your good win' Sandy
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Really enjoyed this poem, loved the descriptions "Marmalade sunset" ... so nice. Well done and congrats on your win. Lee
Guzzi Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Oh my LOL I thought it was like Love Potion Number 9!! Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 2:25 PM
She bent down and turned around and gave me a wink./She said, "I'm gonna mix it up right here in the sink."/It smelled like turpentine and looked like India Ink./I held my nose, I closed my eyes, I took a drink.
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "In Dreams" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 10:51 AM
You always find just the very most descriptive words for all of your poems. This one is exceptionally replete with them. Beautiful. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful dream-poem.
Nutter Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's dream contest.
Bauer Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 5:25 AM
a wonderful poem with such an interesting rhyme scheme. i thoroughly enjoyed it and congratulate you on a well-deserved win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 3:14 AM
You have the most creative talented mind Linda. I always enjoy your poetry and this is a winner. Congratulations to you dear.
A   Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 9:07 PM
Linda, my sweet bff, a wonderful win in Francine Roberts, "In dream" contest. Enjoyed all her winners, love PD
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:46 PM
WON 5TH PLACE .. THANKXXX
Pettit Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 5:31 PM
I can see why this one placed higher in the contest than mine. Congratulations on your win. I'm placing this one in my favorites.
Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:11 PM
you always amaze me that you can use so many flowery and expressive words but never lose track of the theme, a delight to read as usual, congrats on your win Linda Marie
Liwayway Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:07 PM
congrats friend Linda-Marie for this superb write...(^_^)
Johnson Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 2:34 AM
looking pretty damn good babe...
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September 20, 2012 at 7:16 AM
wow, it is so good to have you back, sweetheart, this is awesome way beyond my vocabulary, so i will say.. i love everything about this poem, and it's writter, Hi Ron, you have a gem there
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