Dream Weaver

Moon dancer, in your petticoats, swirling on the lawn,
dewdrop drinker, night wind stalker, daughter of the dawn.

Castanets coil your fingers, diamonds drape your toes;
not equal, but greater, if with normal juxtaposed.

Beautifully different, a gypsy sort of soul,
one, who out of nothing, music can cajole.

Lightly stepping, ever reaching, walking upon air;
if searching, one will find you climbing heaven's stair.

Don't let the stale world change you; continue to pursue
your dreamy fabrication--living impromptu.

Copyright, September 28, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:33 AM
I just love your entry Faye! Congratulations on being in the winner's circle with this delightful poem!
Richards Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 8:06 PM
I can almost hear the click-clack sound of those taps and the castanets!! So great is this!! Congrats to you, Faye.....and thank you so much for all your kind encouragement!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:42 PM
your first 2couplets breathtakingly beautiful Faye.. :D!!!!!!!! wow!! congratulations.. :D
Guzzi Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Lively, wonderful couplets Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Wonderful imagery n great rhyming is ur splendid write Faye! Big congrats on fine win!
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Beautifully penned with stunning imagery many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xxx
Kayode Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Congrats on the win Faye.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Sorry I missed this before but I'm glad I can read this jewel now and congratulate you on your win Faye.
Yvonne Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 7:43 PM
I'm back. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. You were another name I was happy to see on the list.
Yvonne Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:11 AM
We all need dreams. Fine write thank you for an enjoyable read.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 4:59 AM
this is a very beautifully woven piece love the vision in this
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