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Dream Thickened Honey

She bathes--
in the nighttime

in dream thickened honey.

Her mandolin cries
wrapping her chilled 
chords around the moon.

Hear the clocks ticking,
hands 
weightless on the surface,
as butterflies float away
to yesterday.

No effort required,
they sail on such 
sweet notes
that fall with the mellow 
mandolin rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:35 PM
WoW...Love the mandolin rain, beautiful poem!
Nunez Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:50 PM
I've been sorting through your writes. Loved this one. Noticed too that you constantly refer to the moon in your writes. This is just beautiful. Kim
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December 25, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Red I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Barchettadrive Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Linda, Thanks so much! My family & I hope the same & more for yours! Hey, that sort of rhymed! lol Merry Christmas & a great new year for you & yours! -Mark
Lane Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 2:09 PM
ahhh, I hear strains of Bruce Hornsby...'Mandolin Rain.' Very nice.
Barchettadrive Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:22 AM
I was trying to think of Bruce's name the other day to create a Pandora station to blast through my new Amazon Echo, & you just reminded me! Thanks Lin!
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