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Dream Should Not Taste This Lonely

(21/01/2012) Between these green cotton candies, I start to hop over the chunks of dark chocolates, hop by hop I love this dream; creamy and windy -A dreamy dream- Where not very far I can see a house Built with wafers covered by warm dip of choco It’s moist outside but what I think of, could it run dry? -How our covers always tricky, ask me why- The thunder is rumbling, an orange lollipop twist up there They swirl up those light blues and spread the dark, Trying to suck anything inside Look at those skies, from then to these shades of dark? I wonder who could survive that wonderful and deadening stark? -Funny how light can turn to grey- One biggest thunder calls me, I’m charmed by its mighty voice Scared at first, I try to repel myself out But hey, the more I try the more I want to go closer About the danger? I don’t think I care for more -Interesting how curiosity fertilize your brave- Is this where I live now? Or my delusion has taken over my brain and sanity? That house is near but million steps I’ve made Nobody’s here only my small me -I believe dream should not taste this lonely- Inspired by "Between Dreams and Nightmares" Sponsored by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

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Date: 8/8/2012 4:54:00 AM
Ok.....don't vanish all of a sudden....give hints...
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Date: 1/24/2012 1:27:00 AM
wow! I love that line .... -I believe dream should not taste this lonely- did you really dream that sweet candy dream? this is a great write DInda, you open it with sweet then it moves to something a lil' bit painful then darker. a wonderful poem. thanks for your visit n kind comment. good luck on the contest
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Date: 1/23/2012 9:24:00 AM
superbly imaginative and creativity to impress.. Dinda.. never heard of a house so sweet and tempting .. good luck in contest.. I am still recovering from hand surgery. long process and therapy too..luv..
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:34:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this expressive and creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:35:00 PM
This is very imaginative, Dinda. And the way you ended it "dream should not taste this lonely" what an awesome line that was to end it on!!!
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:46:00 PM
Dinda,,,, good luck in the contest...thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD
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