Russell Sivey Poet Tanka

Dream Requiem

A dark unlit room
Minimum realms of cold dreams
Reaches my heart crate
Timbers shook the proud fabric
Existing within dream world

Russell Sivey

Entrant into PD's "any poem about dreams.. (old or new)" contest

2/17/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 21, 2012 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Mario Diletto February 20, 2012 at 8:48 PM congrats on your win..

Samual Ronthorpe February 20, 2012 at 4:23 PM Russell, Using a Tanka was brilliant. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

Jonas L. Rozario February 20, 2012 at 12:22 PM Congrats on your win in the contest Russell.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 20, 2012 at 3:53 AM Congratulations Russell xx

Don Johnson February 20, 2012 at 12:57 AM great winner place upon the tree, well done from ol johnson, me ... well done...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 19, 2012 at 9:13 PM congrats Russell on a great win for this dreamy delight so intense luv..

Poet Destroyer A February 19, 2012 at 7:46 PM Russell.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Robert Pettit February 17, 2012 at 6:40 PM This is a good tanka about your dream. When you reviewed my "Diamonds on Green Velvet", there was a typographical error. The last word was supposed to be "lawn" in lieu of "law". Reading your comment brought that to my attention.

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2012 at 6:10 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this eve..I bet the walls were breathing in and out with that dream sleep..Thanks for the kind review of my work about Willow Skeletal..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2012 at 3:25 PM Well done Russell.Good luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise