Dream of Happiness

Wildly beats the heart, Love’s dawn caresses the eyes, Happiness shimmers! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 January 2016

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Michael Tor

Date: 1/8/2016 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful write Demetrios. Love shines in this one my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/8/2016 11:24:00 AM

Thank you , Michael, you were missed!

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/7/2016 7:08:00 AM

Happiness can indeed be a shimmering light. Nice use of Haiku, Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/8/2016 11:26:00 AM

Thank you Michael W. for your visit and lovely remark!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 8:35:00 PM

ohhhh, LOVE this. I am a summer girl!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/8/2016 11:28:00 AM

My dear Andrea, we all know that you are a lady of ...all seasons! Loved and admired by your friends! Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2016 8:35:00 PM

It makes me think of summer!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/8/2016 11:29:00 AM

Love makes us think of the season we are in love! Thank you, dear Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2016 1:45:00 PM

- Happiness is to have love in their hearts - Always from you dear Demetrios: truth, beauty, and wisdom - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2016 2:10:00 PM

Thank you my dearest Anne-Lise, for your generous and kind words! God bless you! Hugs!

White Sage

Date: 1/6/2016 8:44:00 AM

let happiness forever shimmer....excellent write Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2016 2:11:00 PM

Thank you for you kind words dear friend!