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Dream Macabre

My imagination ran shamelessly amok last night While I slumbered in beaded sweat, askance that I would Be peddling ornate coffins to the absurdly rich, then Second handing them to poorer souls for paltry profit. After black-draped mourners departed for sumptuous feasts I heaved their unboxed tuxedoed beloved into the pit And shoveled them over head to foot with yellow clay. No shame ensuing, I wiped down the shiny satin interior Erasing telltale vestiges of the recently deceased occupant Loaded the ornamental bronze, a considerably less-weighty box, Into the back of my somber black Cadillac hearse And laughing lustily sped away…, then I awakened. Poem received a N/A in the It Feels Surreal Contest

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Date: 12/11/2020 2:01:00 AM
Love this, Lennie. Don't you just love a good dream. Some of them are just so realistic of wacky that they make for great stories like this one of yours (lol) Thanks for sharing. All the best, Charlie
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/14/2020 9:18:00 PM
Uh, who is Lennie? I'm Milt. I certainly do love a good dream, especially one that makes me wake up laughing and thinking "where in the world did that come from!" I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!
Date: 12/8/2020 7:26:00 PM
Oh dear! Lennie Quite like a nightmare this dream. Were you taking Melatonin? Made for a good poem though. SuZ
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Date: 12/10/2020 9:13:00 AM
Suz, I was as startled as anyone when I awakened from this "dream." It was too good not to put into writing! Thanks for your comment.

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