Dream Light

Hardened solid is the clay
That shapes the way I am today
I dream escape from endless grief
Restoring child-like belief

Experience has made me cold
Stolen who I was before
Left behind half of a whole
Changed the essence of my core

I wish to dance in brilliant light
Cleanse my soul with gentle rain
Slumber sound in dark of night
At dawn awaken without pain

Soar up high in skies above
Gaze down upon meadows green
To once again believe in love
To have faith in things unseen

Memories that formed the clay
Although impossible to do
Will them all to melt away
And live the bliss that I once knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Norvell Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 6:18 PM
love this. best wishes....
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January 5, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations Judi, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with your poem, "Dream Light" Life takes it's toll, but the peace is still available to those who seek. I enjoyed your poem. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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December 22, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Judy. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:52 PM
Dear Judy, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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December 21, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Judy! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 4, 2009 at 8:40 PM
Never loose hope my dear. Beautifully written poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week and thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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December 1, 2009 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Judy. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Judy >> James
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November 30, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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November 29, 2009 at 4:39 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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November 29, 2009 at 11:33 AM
I love this poetry, I found it posted by the soup,as a feature and fell in love with it because it flows like music. Hope you will post more and enjoy your day :)
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July 4, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding Dream Light. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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July 1, 2009 at 10:43 PM
You still can=)Opening stanza was really well thought out-->Captured it perfectly
Yates Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 7:35 PM
Wow, that is just so powerful. You really touched a place in my life right now. So, beautiful it took my breath away. I look forward to reading more from you. I would appreciate it if you could check out my poem too. I am new as well....
Fraser Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Beautiful poem Judy, and a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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July 1, 2009 at 12:23 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Judy. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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July 1, 2009 at 9:25 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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