Vijay Pandit Poet Quatorzain

Notes About The Poem

January 27, 2024
Placed 1st: Before the Day Turned Into Night Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Form: Quatorzain; Rhymes: AAAA, BBBB, CCCC, DD
Eight syllables per line (HMS.com)

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Dream Come True

Before the day turned into night
You I saw, what an awesome sight!
A smile of eve, of love and light,
A lovesome theme, my dream did write.

Up high blazed pink arc of the sky,
A spark of joy in purple dye,
A gleeful vibe of sun’s goodbye,
When love in your eyes moon did vie.

You my love, are a dream come true,
For life with you, is life I woo;
On cusp of night, where stars lure you,
To clues of love, the sunset drew.

Pray I now, you will steer my way,
Before this night turns into day.

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Linda Alice Fowler March 28, 2024 at 12:17 PM Lovely and romantic with your flowing words Vijay. Filled with emotion. Congratulations! :)

Charles Messina March 27, 2024 at 11:52 AM Excellent writing, Vijay. Very romantic! Congratulations on your top win! Hope all is well...All the best, Charlie

Paula Goldsmith March 27, 2024 at 11:14 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/colorful write. Love the end of the day with the pretty sky colors... Have a blessed day...........

Linda Alice Fowler January 31, 2024 at 7:08 AM So sweet and romantic. The rhythm and flow of your words. I especially like "Up high blazed pink arc of the sky, A spark of joy in purple dye," - very nice. :)

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2024 at 10:53 AM ahh, this is romantic and very rhythmic. well done, vijay

Christina Bowring January 29, 2024 at 7:36 AM Dear Vijay, this is so beautifully romantic. So well written with your gifted pen. Your rhymes are perfect - studying this new form to me, I presume it’s like a monorhyme but with a restrictive eight syllables and you have done it so majestically. Such a tender write. The lines, ‘ Up high blazed pink arc of the sky’, When love in your eyes moon did vie’ is divine. So enjoyed reading this poem with an air of heavenly romance! Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you :):) Vijay Pandit February 5, 2024 at 1:04 PM Your kindness exudes trough your remarks, Christina. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole January 28, 2024 at 6:15 PM Moments are always magical in a pink sky, while the sun shares a gleeful goodbye. This is beautiful in every way. So dreamy and romantic. Your thoughts bring a smile, Vijay. Keep reaching for the stars, and your dreams will come true. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit February 5, 2024 at 1:02 PM Glad you liked the poem, my friend. Delighted by your presence on my page, Brandy, and your kind insights. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Victor Buhagiar January 28, 2024 at 8:42 AM Love and rhyme. crown this "sonnet" so well woven and appropriate. Best wishes for the contest. Vijay Pandit February 5, 2024 at 1:01 PM Thank you Victor--much appreciate.

Hiya Sharma January 28, 2024 at 6:54 AM Oh my, what a mystical and magical poem this is! The love-filled ambience here is so heartwarming especially your poetic craftsmanship is so spellbinding! "Up high blazed pink arc of the sky", "When love in your eyes moon did vie", "To clues of love, the sunset drew" Ahh, gorgeous descriptions throughout! It's always such a delight to read your beautiful words, hued with enchanting splendor...Absolutely enjoyed reading this, sending many best wishes for the contest, keep writing and shining! Vijay Pandit February 5, 2024 at 1:01 PM Always a joy to read your feedback, Hiya. I am delighted by your insights and your FAVE. Much appreciate. Many thanks. Hiya Sharma January 28, 2024 at 6:55 AM A FAV this is, marvelously knitted!

Ink Empress January 28, 2024 at 6:50 AM Awwn this is so sweet and romantic dear vijay! I always enjoy reading your rhymes and also, your romantic poems are my fave the way you expressed is so moving and poetically eloquent, i love how descriptive it is and the flow of your word weaving is so gorgeous along with colors that enhance the imagery that youv painted in such an artistic manner. I especially love the line “ You my love, are a dream come true, For life with you, is life I woo;“ how lyrically captivating! catchy cadence! FAVE Vijay Pandit February 5, 2024 at 12:59 PM You are always so very kind, my friend. Honored by your remarks and your FAVE, Ink. Many thanks for being there!

Bill Baker January 27, 2024 at 9:30 PM Very romantic poetry, Vijay, in an interesting form of poetry. I like it! Have a pleasant Sunday, my friend. Bill Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:59 AM Glad you liked the poem, Bill. Much appreciate you stopping by, my friend. Many thanks for being there.

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 27, 2024 at 3:12 PM A beautifully wrought tale of a 'sunset dreamer.' I enjoyed the stunning images. This gem is a fave. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:57 AM So succinct, and to the point. Always a joy when you visit, Evelyn. Many thanks, my friend. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

The Situation January 27, 2024 at 12:29 PM Very artful. I spent yesterday looking at the orange sunrise before it turned painfully white. so I can relate to this piece but in an oppisite way Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:55 AM Many thanks--much appreciate you stopping by with your kind feedback.

Sotto Poet January 27, 2024 at 12:17 PM The poem nicely revolves around the beauty of love and the natural world, as well as the idea of longing and yearning for the presence of a loved one, Vijay. Your diction is so rich with vivid imagery and romantic vocabulary. Your use of words like "awesome sight," "lovesome theme," "spark of joy," and "gleeful vibe" creates a sense of wonder and admiration. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:55 AM So special to read your detailed thoughts, my friend. Your feedback is much valued and appreciated, Lasaad. Many thanks for being there.

Joseph May January 27, 2024 at 11:22 AM Very nicely done Vijay, best wishes Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:53 AM Glad to hear it. Much appreciate--many thanks, Joseph.

Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2024 at 10:49 AM Great rhythm and rhyme. Love rules the day. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:53 AM Thank you Richard--much appreciate you stopping by.

Susan Ashley January 27, 2024 at 8:32 AM Dear Vijay, your deep rich poem is utterly beautiful! Your brilliant verse framing vivid romantic imagery is endlessly poetic, my friend. Wonderful rhymes and creative phrasing. Your artistry outshines sunlight! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:52 AM So nice to hear that from a gifted writer. Much appreciate your kind insights, Susan. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2024 at 8:31 AM Very romantic verse Vijay, you are the master of it here. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:52 AM Glad to see you Tom. Much appreciate your presence on my page, as always. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands January 27, 2024 at 7:44 AM This is perfect for the contest! What a beauty too! Well written and flows well. A Fave for me :) Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:51 AM Thank you for being there, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks and your FAVE. Always special when you visit, Heidi.

Silent One January 27, 2024 at 6:22 AM I love how your poem paints a vivid picture of love and longing against the backdrop of a transitioning day. Through its imagery of the twilight sky and the tender exchange of glances, it evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment. The opening lines immediately drew me into the scene, setting the stage for a moment of awe and admiration. The portrayal of the sunset, with its pink arc and purple dye, captures the vibrant hues of nature's canvas and infuses with a sense of joy and anticipation. Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:49 AM Thank you for your supportive feedback, SO. Your detailed insights are much appreciated, my friend. Glad you liked the poem.

Sara Kendrick January 27, 2024 at 5:59 AM Ahh!! I enjoyed reading your post..So romantic. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K Vijay Pandit January 28, 2024 at 5:46 AM Thank you for being the first to comment on this poem, Sara. Your presence on my page is much valued and appreciated.