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Dream Big- Er

If you wish to make life brighter,
You start now, as light grows dimmer.
With every effort, life will gleam.
Success comes to those who can dream.

If darkness invades your abode,
Know light lurks at end of the road.
Strive hard to achieve what you scheme.
Success comes to those who can dream.

Listen closely to what mind tells,
Shut your ears to negative yells.
Dream big, do your best, never scream.
Success comes to those who can dream.

Your thoughts should soar up to the sky.
Aim high, dreams shape your destiny.
With hard work alone life won’t bloom.	
Success comes to those who can dream. 

Oh! Lovely, blessed dreams of heaven
Waft us with sweet fancy divine
With dreams our life we can redeem
Success comes to those who can dream.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2023

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Sam Kauffman Date: 6/27/2023 12:17:00 PM Dearest Valsa, your words overflow with wisdom! If you want brighter light, start when the light is dim - paraphrase of your beautiful opening lines! When the light is dim, it is hard to dream but your poem is one of encouragement to the discouraged heart! To stand up and let your dream be the light of creativity showing new paths! Chose light over darkness. Beautifully written. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you and your dreams! Login to Reply

Stephan McBride Date: 6/21/2023 6:17:00 PM Beautiful inspiring poem, love the flow, encouragement, wisdom and knowledge to cling to : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/21/2023 12:07:00 PM very nicely done , your kyrielle for that specific quote. I think it's the same quote I may have chosen as well, Valsa. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 6/21/2023 11:52:00 AM Dreams are the foundation of the future. Sometimes dreams of past put us in sorrowful mode, we have to strive hard to get out of it. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/21/2023 11:10:00 AM I like the inspiration you convey, Valsa. And the sound of your repeating line. Dreams give hope and courage to move forward. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/21/2023 9:40:00 AM Stephen King once wrote that he dream to write (horror stories) My dreams are also nightmares and cannot rid of past events/ It is only lately that I dream of my deceased wife. But can anyone control his sub-conscience? Great meditative poem, dear Valsa. May you have happy dreams only. Login to Reply