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DREAM I had a dream it felt so real you featured inside no shock or surprise I want to know why we have three whole seconds of true reflection in the closing blink of an eye you there and soaking in the grass bright sunshine with a wide smile and I with my body of kindling wringing it all in with lack of confidence and constant fidgeting © Kim van Breda—6 January 2016

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Date: 1/6/2016 9:17:00 PM
in my dream Beauty reigns supreme as a Beautiful queen chooses me as her king who gives the heaviest diamond ring so her heart can forever sing as my Angel spreads her always kim you provoke Beautiful inspiration....;)
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Kim van Breda
Date: 1/6/2016 10:03:00 PM
WOW Eric .. what a beautiful comment.. thank you ~~X~~