Dreadful Sights and Sounds

Old Bones
Sad Groans
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 4:24 PM
Great take on this one. Congratulations on winning. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Wonderful footle, Savannah! Congratulations on your success in Donna's contest. My "old bones" are emitting some "sad groans" from time to time as well. Love, Carolyn
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October 26, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations Savannah, on this winning footle!! ~ Love, Carrie
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October 26, 2009 at 4:30 AM
And a wonderful Footle it is! Congratulations on your win in Donnas' contest, Savannah! Love, Robin
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October 26, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Savannah. Love, Carol
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October 25, 2009 at 10:57 PM
Great footle, Savannah! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna
Lopez Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:12 PM
my bones somtimes groan as well .... very nice!
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October 12, 2009 at 2:15 PM
Hey, Savannah, this would be a great "skeleton" entry for the Halloween Footle contest! I hope you've entered it, though it also speaks vividly of the aging process. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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October 12, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Nice footle Savannah, those sad bones are groaning...Raul
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