Drawn By Your Scent

Holding you so close is delightful
Your scent draws me in
                               Leads me to desire you more
                                                 Just to place my soft lips 'pon you 
Dreaming of the delicate thrill
                                      When my lips meet the flavor that I desire
Longing for the time when we can meet in secret
                                                          Soon, oh, very soon this will happen
Just a few more minutes 
                             Then I can slip away to join you in sweet rapsody
                Holding onto the dream of your sweetness
                                                        Coveting any time with you
As I walk to our rendezvous
               Our love hideaway anticipation builds until 
I unwrap your swirling red  luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom
                     Your aroma surrounds me...

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Softly Sensual
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Boyle Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it.
Hill Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 8:13 AM
aaaaa......love. This poem can stir the stoniest of hearts.....very well done.
Ryerson Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Oh my Sara!...Haven't seen this side of you before! So very glad I did...Congrats - Tim
Mannan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Beautiful. Many warm congrats for the win.
A   Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Sara, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Yamin Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Nette Onclauds contest of 9/1/2013. A superb poem -highly expressive. Thanks Sara for visiting my poem My Pen and for your uplifting message of congratulations. -Mohammad
May Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:57 AM
congrats on your win Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Beautifuly expressed, congratulations Sara.
A  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Hello Sara, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Well Sara, not quite sure if it's the sent of the flower or the captivating feeling of sensual love that inspired this poem. Either way I love the soft and sensual feel ...congrats on your win :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 6:48 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Sara! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 4:14 AM
Wow..This is indeed soft and sensual..Such a beautiful ardent poem..Charma
Phillips Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Nice imaginative and creative poem. "I unwrap your swirling red luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom" nice symbolism demonstrated in this line
Babu Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:44 AM
great work.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 4:49 PM
wonderful, SAra. I just look at that picture and can't even think what to write about!!!
Manassian Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 4:29 PM
SARA!!!! SARA SARA SARA! :) This is so amazing! I am so impressed, my dear! It is nice to see this side of you...Good luck in the contest with this sweet write! HUGS!
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:34 PM
your lines draw me in!
Carroll Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Hi Sara, Lovely romantic write..Good luck in the contest... Ken
Posey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:07 PM
My, Oh My.... I've never seen this side of you.... Great entry in the contest.... Sara, I always enjoy my visits to your portfolio.... Love ya dearly..... Jake
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:25 AM
love this romantic write, my friend
Sivey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 7:48 AM
Wow Sara, you have expressed your sensual side quite amazingly with this write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your incredible poem this morning! Your style is very impressive as well! What a lovely piece, such a grand verse, Great Work!!
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