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Drawn By Your Scent

Holding you so close is delightful Your scent draws me in Leads me to desire you more Just to place my soft lips 'pon you Dreaming of the delicate thrill When my lips meet the flavor that I desire Longing for the time when we can meet in secret Soon, oh, very soon this will happen Just a few more minutes Then I can slip away to join you in sweet rapsody Holding onto the dream of your sweetness Coveting any time with you As I walk to our rendezvous Our love hideaway anticipation builds until I unwrap your swirling red luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom Your aroma surrounds me... Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Softly Sensual

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Patrick Boyle

Date: 9/20/2013 10:54:00 AM

Very nice poem, I really enjoyed it.

Wayne Hill

Date: 9/14/2013 8:13:00 AM

aaaaa......love. This poem can stir the stoniest of hearts.....very well done.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/5/2013 6:01:00 PM

Oh my Sara!...Haven't seen this side of you before! So very glad I did...Congrats - Tim

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/2/2013 10:07:00 PM

Beautiful. Many warm congrats for the win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2013 9:20:00 PM

Sara, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/2/2013 6:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/2/2013 8:30:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win in Nette Onclauds contest of 9/1/2013. A superb poem -highly expressive. Thanks Sara for visiting my poem My Pen and for your uplifting message of congratulations. -Mohammad

Joseph May

Date: 9/2/2013 7:57:00 AM

congrats on your win Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2013 7:57:00 AM

Beautifuly expressed, congratulations Sara.

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:35:00 PM

Hello Sara, a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT ~

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/1/2013 11:58:00 AM

Well Sara, not quite sure if it's the sent of the flower or the captivating feeling of sensual love that inspired this poem. Either way I love the soft and sensual feel ...congrats on your win :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2013 6:48:00 AM

- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic, Sara! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/29/2013 4:14:00 AM

Wow..This is indeed soft and sensual..Such a beautiful ardent poem..Charma

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/27/2013 6:35:00 AM

Nice imaginative and creative poem. "I unwrap your swirling red luscious, tantalizing Lily Blossom" nice symbolism demonstrated in this line

Yadhu Babu

Date: 8/27/2013 2:44:00 AM

great work.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2013 4:49:00 PM

wonderful, SAra. I just look at that picture and can't even think what to write about!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/26/2013 4:29:00 PM

SARA!!!! SARA SARA SARA! :) This is so amazing! I am so impressed, my dear! It is nice to see this side of you...Good luck in the contest with this sweet write! HUGS!

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 8/26/2013 3:34:00 PM

your lines draw me in!

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/26/2013 1:19:00 PM

Hi Sara, Lovely romantic write..Good luck in the contest... Ken

John Posey

Date: 8/26/2013 12:07:00 PM

My, Oh My.... I've never seen this side of you.... Great entry in the contest.... Sara, I always enjoy my visits to your portfolio.... Love ya dearly..... Jake

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2013 9:25:00 AM

love this romantic write, my friend

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2013 7:48:00 AM

Wow Sara, you have expressed your sensual side quite amazingly with this write my friend! I really enjoyed reading your incredible poem this morning! Your style is very impressive as well! What a lovely piece, such a grand verse, Great Work!!