Drawing a Blank

We picked up straws one by one,
Were chosen just by chance.
And thirteen men were drawn by lots,
With power to play God.

We marched in ordered single file,
To the armory went,
Each was given a tool of death
To kill with legal writ

Lone post stood in the central yard,
Pocked with pustilent sores,
Yet sturdy for a human weight
Without a bend or break.

We stood in single solemn row
Muttering silent prayers.
The hapless man was brought amain
And stood before the post.

His hands were tied around the mast
Blind-folded was he then,
Yet proud he stood without a fuss,
Moments before his death.

There was ammo in guns out there
Yet some were duds by law.
Oh how I hate the Firing Squad
I hope I draw a blank!

The sergeant in his booming voice
Said aim, we took our aim.
Fire, he said, in firmer tone.
We pressed the trigger then.

Lord, I had prayed with all fervour,
Let me not be the one
Who spills the life blood of this man,
Lord let mine be a blank!

The stutter of the guns were stilled,
Man  was ragdoll now.
I sighed and saw my gun was jammed
I'd drawn a blank indeed!

So now I sleep with conscience clear
The Good Lord jammed my gun
And forever spared me the doubt
If I had drawn a blank!

¬ 11 May 2016 ¬

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/12/2016 7:59:00 PM
wow, this was REALLy clever, how you took the title and made it literally humorous!! GREAT job. I would let this win in MY contest for its cleverness.
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/13/2016 12:57:00 AM
Thank you for liking it, Andrea. I had drawn a literal "Blanl" on what to write when it suddenly struck me to write on the conscript chosen to be on the firing squad. The squad is chosen by lots, and rifles issued to them containing both blanks and live ammo. The soldier forever keeps wondering if it was his bullet that did the job. Jamming of the rifle makes the question irrelevant. Thanks, once again, for your wonderful response to the poem. ~luv, kc.~
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