Drawback To Mask-Wearing

Her beguiling eyes took my breath away Above the silken mask she chose to wear Her coif most flattering above her face, Until I saw her teeth -- the worst, I swear!
Written August 8, 2022

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Date: 8/12/2022 9:12:00 PM
This is the only reason I like the half masks.
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Date: 8/11/2022 3:02:00 AM
lol liked this one Milton you have been hanging around Gershon, ha ha.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/11/2022 7:55:00 AM
I suppose you could say that. Gershon and I go back as far as I can remember being on PS.
Date: 8/9/2022 3:22:00 PM
Put the mask back on! Put it back on…lol
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Date: 8/9/2022 4:21:00 PM
By all means, Kim. Maybe the next person will be nicer about it. Just kiddin'. This, too, is fiction!
Date: 8/9/2022 11:10:00 AM
Her moustache would have been more shocking! Aloha!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/9/2022 12:08:00 PM
That would be very true, Rico. That never entered my mind!
Date: 8/9/2022 10:57:00 AM
A visit to the dentist is long overdue bet she was glad when they brought in the mask rule. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/9/2022 12:08:00 PM
Possibly. Or, she might have been on meth (which will destroy a person's teeth) for all I know.
Date: 8/9/2022 7:55:00 AM
lol Milt.
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Date: 8/9/2022 8:14:00 AM
Glad you got a laugh out of this one, Jenna. I don't know how it came about, but sometimes I get these crazy thoughts!
Date: 8/8/2022 7:52:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! How about her breath?! Ha, ha, ha!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/8/2022 8:16:00 PM
Even worse, gw. I'm glad I got behind that mask before going too far!
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