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Dram Bird

The hummingbird hums right nicely hovers for a quick look to see If friend or foe you be Then scoots away zip-a-dee . .M. HH bb HH HHHH V HHHH HHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHH HHH HH HHH H /III\ H //I\\

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Darel Cobbe

Date: 10/8/2010 10:15:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome such a wonderful write i will read your work again

Rebecca Nash

Date: 9/15/2010 3:13:00 PM

Thank you for your welcoming....and this is very cute....i love hummingbirds :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2010 7:43:00 AM

Lots of work went into this one..Glad that you enjoyed the emails..I especially like the one about the Dr also..If you are round that is a shape..Good one..You did a cute rhyme in this one also..Mom

Lindsay Kelly

Date: 9/2/2010 1:39:00 PM

Wow, what a fresh quirky poem! Really enjoyed.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 8:10:00 AM

How true, Doris, they hover and scoot away so quickly! I admire the way you drew the hummingbird, too. That takes a lot of artistic talent, my friend. Best wishes to you, dear! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2010 5:25:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Doris. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2010 10:59:00 PM

Cute, Doris!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/31/2010 2:28:00 PM

What a wonderful write, mae me smile too...Michael