Dragons For Contest, Written 18 Oct '15

Down they swooped, so keen,
In perfect vee formation
Bronzes, browns, a green
Two blues and, showing elation, 
Lastly, at midpoint, the great golden Queen
Beloved of our tiny nation,
Their plate sized eyes awhirr
As they sought new station.
The sulphur smell
Near knocked us out
Reminiscent of the hell
Of the recent rout.
They parted ranks to let her through
She landed, claws ascreech
Then the cohhort came in two by two
Onto the hold’s deserted beech.
We stood and stared, such is their beauty
Wiry wings preening, scales a-gleaming, 
Nostrils wide, flaring; we forgot our duty
Watching the huge claws, necks and tails a-steaming.
A cry was heard, we’d near forgotten
The riders perched high and tiny a-dragon back
We caught ‘em as they slid down harness rotten
From exposure to dragon-flame 
And invasive. searing enemy thread
Dragonback fighting is no game
‘Twas a mercy none were dead.
Into the hot baths the riders tumbled
Soon to get out, red and scrubbed,
And all to refectory they then stumbled
And as they ate, shoulders would be rubbed.
Outside dragons noble, groomed, of all harnesses relieved
Rose as one and pointed to the prairie
Soon became small, on their way to feed
On herd-beasts fleshy and not too hairy
And so we went to the inner ring, there
To spread fresh grass for dragons’ beds 
And check their water with great care
And bring pillows for their noble heads.

[Apologies to Anne McCaffrey.]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 25, 2016 at 9:47 PM
JO, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
Saunders Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Hmmmn - not really, just been too depressed to come onto the site much, but had an email alert, and responded to that. Happy writing! Shall visit your page soon. jo :)
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January 23, 2016 at 6:09 PM
JO, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**
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January 24, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Thanks, Linda! Yiu enjoy your day too.
Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Flamable grass for a Dragon's bed? Loved this winning write... Congratulations!
Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 5:20 PM
I've GOT to read those books! Almost did a few times... Definately will now.
Saunders Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Carol. The McCaffrey dragons only breathe fire when they are fed firestone, in battle.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Jo!
Saunders Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Thank yoou Upma. Kind ofyou to read it.
Wigley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Great write, very Tolkeinesque. Congrats! Viv
Saunders Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Viv, McCaffrey rather than Tolkien, but thanks for the compliment!
Lindley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Congrats on your win!
Saunders Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Obliged, Robert. I was chuffed.
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:34 PM
a vivid descriptive write - congrats on your win Jo:-) hugs jan xx
Saunders Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Thanks again, Jan
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