Dragons- For Contest

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The thunder reached them well before
it's shadow flashed along the shore
as whirlwinds from the steady beat
knocked fleeing hordes from off their feet.
Thousands sprinted to the surf
except a few who had the nerve
and put up spirited defence
and fell in flares of heat intense.
Fast and low, wings whipped the waves
glistening scales of charcoal, Jade.
Skimming clifftops, banking right,
climbing until out of sight,
then corkscrew dive in view it hove
and settled in a quiet cove.
On rocky crag where beast had fetched
it gazed down on her wings outstretched,
mother of pearl breast warmed by sun
she looked up at the one who'd come.
Crimson eyes met gaze of blue,
"Vanilla's sold out- will chocolate do?"


For contest- 'Dragons', sponsored by Silent One.
October 19th 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/23/2015 11:19:00 AM
Viv, you're the man! What an excellent, witty write with great imagery that I enjoyed reading! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 10/24/2015 12:42:00 AM
Thanks Pandita, isn't it nice when sometimes a poem just falls into place with little effort? Enjoyed writing it, glad you liked it, too. Viv x
Date: 10/23/2015 3:24:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Viv!
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Date: 10/24/2015 12:41:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma, appreciate your visit. Viv x
Date: 10/23/2015 2:47:00 AM
Nice win Viv!!
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Date: 10/24/2015 12:41:00 AM
Thanks, Michael, very kind. regards, Viv
Date: 10/22/2015 8:29:00 PM
My friend, an excellent poem -congrats on your win. A7
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Robert, and well done on your oneness. Best wishes to you and yours, Viv
Date: 10/22/2015 5:42:00 PM
Love your humour Mr Viv - I didnt see the ending coming:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:32:00 PM
I suppose they'd have to eat them very quickly... thanks Jan x
Date: 10/20/2015 5:28:00 PM
Well - I just love this this creative piece!!!!!
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Date: 10/21/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Genevieve, I enjoyed writing it. Viv x
Date: 10/20/2015 11:26:00 AM
If my dragon lady was craving vanilla, I know damn well that chocolate won't do! Nice twist. Emile.
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:27:00 PM
good point, Emile- you can't please the female of any species when it comes to sweet things. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/20/2015 1:04:00 AM
Didn't see the ending coming - I love it when that happens and I'm sure it was your intent. This is well done, many worthy elements and should do extremely well in the contest ... CayCay
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Date: 10/20/2015 1:31:00 AM
I like a twist, CayCay. This poem sort of reminds me of the old joke about a crab who went to buy his wife ice cream, but they were melting so he kept licking them. When he returned with nothing left and said he'd had to eat them, she said, " You know your trouble? You're just shellfish" Viv x
Date: 10/20/2015 1:04:00 AM
Viv, I really do enjoy your delightful writes; Mr Whippy as we know him. Told the kids when he plays the music, he's run out of ice cream... but kids talk at school don't they - Lindsay
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Date: 10/20/2015 1:32:00 AM
I can't believe you'd have such a cruel streak, Lindsay, but I must admit it's cost effective. Thanks for dropping by- hope you're well. Regards, Viv
Date: 10/19/2015 1:31:00 PM
- .... love that end :))) - A wonderful poem, Viv - I wish you good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise, it's one of those poems that I literally cobbled together in fifteen minutes and it all fell into place. Really enjoyed writing it. Tusen Takk, Viv x
Date: 10/19/2015 11:54:00 AM
I just added you as a favorite poet too my friend!
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
I've gone all humbly.Thanks x
Date: 10/19/2015 11:52:00 AM
This is BRILLIANT! A keeper and a fave Viv. Wish I had the talent to write like this! #7 I know I will see this as a top winner!
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
You have and you do, Connie. Many thanks, very kind. Love 'n hugs, Viv x
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