Dragon

A long, long time ago				
A girl lived with an unpredictable dragon.	
She walked softly around his brooding silence,	
but many times the flames cast forth despite her care.
She would scramble to take refuge, and make amends.
Struggling to please, ducking to avoid being singed.
The dragon was silent for days, or raged for hours.
Peeking around the corner when she walked home, 
she looked  for his long tail, the black tip quivering
as then she knew he lay anticipating her,  	
but eventually she would have to enter	
and face the hot ozone smell ,or the cold quiet.
The puzzling times were when the dragon was friendly
leaving gifts that were thoughtful, claiming devotion.
The girl grew stronger and his hold on her lessened.
She still felt compelled to check on dragon at times;
eventually he burned himself to cinders. 
Freed, she stopped looking for tails around the corner,
but the dread of his malevolence persisted
especially in dreams.

3-1-2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/26/2017 7:32:00 AM
Your metaphorical dragon is nicely presented and sad and scary to live with such a creature. I've been reading various poems this morning and yours is the first I've found that I've truly enjoyed.
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Date: 3/23/2017 2:44:00 PM
Definitely not Peter, Paul and Mary's Puff but dragons seldom are. Well written and welcome to the Soup
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:17:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Tania, I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write , but I love to ready about Dragons ... Hugs Eve
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Tania Horne
Date: 3/13/2017 9:41:00 PM
Wow! So exciting!
Date: 3/2/2017 5:47:00 AM
SUPERB POETRY..A7 Addictions come in many. many forms..
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Tania Horne
Date: 3/2/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you - I was trying to come up with something new and it is a *little* contrived by syllable count but it felt good to write it.
Date: 3/1/2017 11:02:00 PM
This is a very relatable poem, I have such a dragon too. Very well worded first poem here on PoetrySoup, A difficult one to write too, I can imagine. Welcome to all of us here :)
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Tania Horne
Date: 3/2/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thank you so much!I hope to make the time to look around more and appreciate the site.
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