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Downstream

She locked the doors, and left the place, where laughter had faded, like old worn lace. Another sunset, has caught her eye, a change much needed, from worn out lies. Nothing she took, on that freedom day, she left it all, between walls of decay. Her season of change, took quiet some time, but soon she will hear, pitiful whimpers, and whines. Deaf now her ears, but her eyes now see, the beauty of laughter, waiting downstream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/21/2009 6:08:00 PM
Hi Christy. It takes a lot of courage to leave the "worn lace" behind sometimes. And I'm so glad the poem ended on a happy note: "the beauty of laughter waiting downstream." Beautiful! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:03:00 AM
I wish her so much luck on her life anew and she may not need it if she can already hear the laughter. Terrific write here as it tells the tale of many a person that escapes harsh reality. Michael
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:41:00 AM
Change often does take time. A beautiful write with great depth. Well done Christy. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/10/2009 5:22:00 AM
This is a very good write friend. Love the last stanza.. the message in the piece is great...love, Chris.
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Date: 2/10/2009 4:00:00 AM
Nice ending Christy, the sound of laughter is a great thing to hear, it has healing powers...Raul
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Date: 2/9/2009 8:29:00 PM
It's hard to live without the sound of laughter or the sight of a glowing smile. It is part of what keeps us sane. Loved this write always the best, Blessings, Ron
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Date: 2/9/2009 6:45:00 PM
Sad but true, and yes ,change will come in time. A very good poem, keep up the good work. love you always, Marie
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