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“Mother,” she cried, “You cannot crowd everything in your new space. Ridding yourself of some of it is something you must face.” I was opening a small red box as she began to speak. When I saw the contents that it held my aging legs turned weak. I’d put them away when he had died for seeing them made me sad. They were still there all neatly tied, love letters from her dad. I turned to her with welling eyes. “These go with me to my grave. Your daddy wrote them to me, they are something I must save.” “Of course, Mamma, it’s up to you. I’m just cautioning you a bit. We must weed out the useless things. They simply will not fit.” I put the box on the dresser where some other treasures lay, items I knew I must go through before I moved away. I gazed at the familiar room and the furniture it contained. I fancied I heard the pieces scream, “Am I discarded or retained?” I called my daughter to me and asked her to sit down. “ Don’t be disgusted with me Honey, I’m not moving into town. I know you think I am not safe, alone on this old farm. I’ve lived here now for sixty years and have never come to harm. Your dad and I were frugal, we didn’t buy unneeded things. The only jewelry that we owned was our two wedding rings. I’ve never had a garage sale. I had no excess to sell, and we had no reason to buy new, when the old worked just as well. I fit in here as comfortably as I do in my old shoes. Everything in this old house I love or is of use. Knowing I’d made up my mind, my daughter sweetly assented. Staying in my home with beloved things, I never have repented. My letters in their box are on my little bedside table. I’ll read one with my prayers each night, as long as I am able. Won 2nd place

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Date: 7/5/2011 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:05:00 AM
That is so sweet :) What a picture you paint! Congrats. on your big win!!!!
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:32:00 AM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win, Joyce. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Have a great Fourth. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:14:00 AM
a joy to read with matching congrats on your win, joyce! wow...:) huggs
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:35:00 PM
my kind of poem, filled with real emotions, real people, familiar settings and situations....beautiful piece of work Joyce....best wishes ... Syd
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your 2nd place win with this touching entry my friend..lovely.. happy 4th.. we are watching fireworks now..
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:48:00 PM
A lovely poem on a mother with her memories. I can relate.
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:48:00 PM
A lovely poem on a mother with her memories. I can relate.
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:26:00 AM
NEVER part with those letters, dear. The memories they hold mean far too much. And I'm glad you decided to stay on the farm. Children want to see their parents in "safe" places, but sometimes fail to understand that their parents are perfectly fine just where they are -- and more likely to maintain a positive attitude as well. Awesome entry for the Garage Sale contest. Winning wishes coming your way! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:48:00 AM
Beautifully penned Joyce, you had me in tears by the last line! Best wishes to you Em :)
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:39:00 PM
Joyce, you addressed each of the topics of the assignment to the TEE. this is a splendid retelling of how you reacted to an event which was not needful for you. LOVE it.
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