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Downsizing

Strong winds of time accelerate with age, sweep toward the unsuspecting, forging alliances with atrophy and arthritis, debilitating the innocent. The hurricane of decline begins with gusts, barely noticed in years of productivity. But without warning gusts become streams. Streams turn into torrents. Torrents, tsunamis, opening submission's door. Downsizing's time has arrived. Stuff is now a dearest friend, space the greatest enemy in this geriatric ritual. Time laughs at tears, celebrates pain as each treasured object is evaluated in unsteady fingers. Piece by piece is slated for separation and taken away by unfeeling hands. The enemy has won.

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Date: 9/25/2020 6:08:00 AM
Wisdom reigns as youth is plundered. I can feel you letting go and those unfeeling hands taking pleasure in their robbery. Great poetry comes with wisdom of life.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 9/25/2020 6:14:00 AM
It is interesting that we write with more clarity when we write about what's affecting us at the moment.

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