Downsizing

downsizing so much to pack hummingbirds visit posted on June 2018

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Winged Warrior

Date: 6/11/2018 11:36:00 AM

I love it when hummingbirds visit...and your haiku...love and light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/11/2018 5:49:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, WW.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2018 6:54:00 PM

this is my favorite. And I wish they didn't say not to use titles with our haiku. the title makes it all the better!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2018 10:09:00 PM

They wore me down, Andrea. Now my titles are merely temporary and for filing purposes. So I make sure they don't become in fact a 4th line. I end up grouping my haiku by season and give the compilation a title. LOL