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Debbie Downer - Changes subject to something tragic or emphasizes something tragic.

DOWNER She Knew I.D. is key Her Thoughts yet she couldn’t be She Felt alone sans moan What She Did had worst outburst Inner Squeeze cramped knots sad thoughts Introspective graphic tragic Phone Tag linked arms no charms Community Share brings down whole town Her World upside downside

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2025 12:09:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Downer" Footle write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful spring day writing away.........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2025 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Have a wonderful evening!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2025 9:27:00 PM

Debbie Downer is such. Cute way to be inspired to write footles. Did you enter this in one of Brian's contests? Hope you get a win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2025 6:11:00 PM

Yes and thank you, Andrea! Of course, you inspire me :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/26/2025 9:24:00 PM

had worst / outburst, reminiscent of my own worst experience ever: 'Had worst / bratwurst.' lol. ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2025 6:12:00 PM

That is da wurst…lol!

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/26/2025 5:58:00 AM

Yep, stuff happens. And happens. And happens. Time for a glass of wine. A two wine evening. Old 50's love songs -- those with happy endings. And no Stravinsky!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2025 7:34:00 AM

Love hearing your mindset :)

Paige Hind

Date: 4/25/2025 2:40:00 PM

Deep footle- I really don't know how you did it, lol, really really good poetry

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2025 5:40:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/25/2025 12:36:00 PM

Very nice dear lovely Kim! A favorite! Sweet tweet :-) Have a nice weekend ~ AA

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2025 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, AA! Have a great weekend! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2025 11:19:00 AM

This is very innovate way of writing. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2025 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2025 10:25:00 AM

She Felt alone sans moan: such a wonderful footle with seamless flow and bright rhyme, this a fave

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2025 1:45:00 PM

I appreciate you! Thank you, Lasaad!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/25/2025 7:55:00 AM

Dear kim, this is so creative and clever how youv written this downer, with such brilliant rhymes, i especially loved “ What She Did had worst outburst Inner Squeeze cramped knots sad thoughts” how it flows is so impressive! Your footle is brilliant! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2025 9:27:00 AM

Thank you so much xx