Kim Rodrigues Poet Footle

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Debbie Downer - Changes subject to something tragic or emphasizes something tragic. 

Downer

DOWNER

She Knew
I.D.
is key

Her Thoughts
yet she
couldn’t be

She Felt
alone
sans moan

What She Did
had worst
outburst

Inner Squeeze
cramped knots
sad thoughts

Introspective
graphic
tragic

Phone Tag
linked arms
no charms

Community Share
brings down
whole town

Her World
upside
downside

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Paula Goldsmith April 27, 2025 at 12:09 PM I enjoyed reading your "Downer" Footle write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful spring day writing away......... Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2025 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Paula! Have a wonderful evening!

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2025 at 9:27 PM Debbie Downer is such. Cute way to be inspired to write footles. Did you enter this in one of Brian's contests? Hope you get a win Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2025 at 6:11 PM Yes and thank you, Andrea! Of course, you inspire me :)

Gershon Wolf April 26, 2025 at 9:24 PM had worst / outburst, reminiscent of my own worst experience ever: 'Had worst / bratwurst.' lol. ~ gw Kim Rodrigues April 27, 2025 at 6:12 PM That is da wurst…lol!

Joseph P. DiMino April 26, 2025 at 5:58 AM Yep, stuff happens. And happens. And happens. Time for a glass of wine. A two wine evening. Old 50's love songs -- those with happy endings. And no Stravinsky! Kim Rodrigues April 26, 2025 at 7:34 AM Love hearing your mindset :)

Paige Hind April 25, 2025 at 2:40 PM Deep footle- I really don't know how you did it, lol, really really good poetry Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2025 at 5:40 PM Thank you, Paige!

Abdullah Alhemaidy April 25, 2025 at 12:36 PM Very nice dear lovely Kim! A favorite! Sweet tweet :-) Have a nice weekend ~ AA Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2025 at 1:44 PM Thank you, AA! Have a great weekend! :)

Victor Buhagiar April 25, 2025 at 11:19 AM This is very innovate way of writing. Well done. Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2025 at 1:44 PM Thank you, my friend!

Sotto Poet April 25, 2025 at 10:25 AM She Felt alone sans moan: such a wonderful footle with seamless flow and bright rhyme, this a fave Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2025 at 1:45 PM I appreciate you! Thank you, Lasaad!

Ink Empress April 25, 2025 at 7:55 AM Dear kim, this is so creative and clever how youv written this downer, with such brilliant rhymes, i especially loved “ What She Did had worst outburst Inner Squeeze cramped knots sad thoughts” how it flows is so impressive! Your footle is brilliant! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Kim Rodrigues April 25, 2025 at 9:27 AM Thank you so much xx