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Downer

DOWNER

She Knew
I.D.
is key

Her Thoughts
yet she
couldn’t be

She Felt
alone
sans moan

What She Did
had worst
outburst

Inner Squeeze
cramped knots
sad thoughts

Introspective
graphic
tragic

Phone Tag
linked arms
no charms

Community Share
brings down
whole town

Her World
upside
downside

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/27/2025 12:09:00 PM I enjoyed reading your "Downer" Footle write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful spring day writing away......... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2025 6:11:00 PM Thank you, Paula! Have a wonderful evening!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/26/2025 9:27:00 PM Debbie Downer is such. Cute way to be inspired to write footles. Did you enter this in one of Brian's contests? Hope you get a win Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2025 6:11:00 PM Yes and thank you, Andrea! Of course, you inspire me :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/26/2025 9:24:00 PM had worst / outburst, reminiscent of my own worst experience ever: 'Had worst / bratwurst.' lol. ~ gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2025 6:12:00 PM That is da wurst…lol!

Joe Dimino Date: 4/26/2025 5:58:00 AM Yep, stuff happens. And happens. And happens. Time for a glass of wine. A two wine evening. Old 50's love songs -- those with happy endings. And no Stravinsky! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/26/2025 7:34:00 AM Love hearing your mindset :)

Paige Hind Date: 4/25/2025 2:40:00 PM Deep footle- I really don't know how you did it, lol, really really good poetry Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/25/2025 5:40:00 PM Thank you, Paige!

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 4/25/2025 12:36:00 PM Very nice dear lovely Kim! A favorite! Sweet tweet :-) Have a nice weekend ~ AA Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/25/2025 1:44:00 PM Thank you, AA! Have a great weekend! :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/25/2025 11:19:00 AM This is very innovate way of writing. Well done. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/25/2025 1:44:00 PM Thank you, my friend!

Sotto Poet Date: 4/25/2025 10:25:00 AM She Felt alone sans moan: such a wonderful footle with seamless flow and bright rhyme, this a fave Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/25/2025 1:45:00 PM I appreciate you! Thank you, Lasaad!

Ink Empress Date: 4/25/2025 7:55:00 AM Dear kim, this is so creative and clever how youv written this downer, with such brilliant rhymes, i especially loved “ What She Did had worst outburst Inner Squeeze cramped knots sad thoughts” how it flows is so impressive! Your footle is brilliant! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/25/2025 9:27:00 AM Thank you so much xx