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Downbeat

~ downbeat ~

   cold feet
   seek heat

   they meet
   hot seat
 
   no treat
   they tweet
 
   these feet
   mincemeat

   we're beat
   they bleat

   complete
   defeat

   drumbeat
   downbeat

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Date: 12/17/2021 8:07:00 AM
Your footles are always lovely; this is no exception
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Date: 12/10/2021 7:00:00 AM
You certainly ran your feet off down the footle path, Gershon. Fun read.
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Date: 12/9/2021 10:42:00 AM
Great string of footles Gershon I love this form. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2021 5:14:00 PM
This form's the norm in college dorms.

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