Down Payment Blues - Usa

In the land of the free
What has gone wrong
From the thirteen States
Where is the song

The song that united
A people so free
From the land of so many
In downward spiral spree

Of resources so vast
In lands so spread
What has driven this nation
To tomorrow dread

Employment is so important
As it allows families to grow
They may not become rich
But in their garden, they sow

In this modern world
Where we are in chemical shine
We have to look after our health
Not just yours, but mine


The People have Spoken
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We must reduce our Nuclear Cause
Because its not right for us
We have to be loyal to us Americans
For it deters us to cuss

We must look to our neighbours
If we can sort out the above
Pat each other on the back
Then we no longer shove

We must look to tomorrow
And reduce conglomerate gain
Because in our free America
They increase our strain

We must look to foreign policy
For we are a nation of mix
Our talking starts today
For our future fix

We must look to the White House
As we elect them in
We must never be judgemental
On their colour of skin

We must look to the future
Through the most beautiful of hues
Our future is our health
Or is it Down Payment Blues

We must look to the heavens
If we are religious or what
We don't want to look on our past
As forget me not


Listen to the People
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Inspired by AC/DC's " Down Payment Blues "




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March 27, 2010 at 3:13 PM
I agree with the whole neighberinos remark . You got to get someone on your side. The goverment only wants for themself. And the payments is what puts us in the blues. P.D.
Haick Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 2:15 PM
This is another great poem, filled with insight and if we are to move forward everyone will have to look deep within and make a choice for the better...it should not be all about money and power. ....Thanks, Highlander, always. GOes to my favs. today...Peace and love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Turmoil is more like it James.. the Constitution has been shredded ... no one hears our uproar at this point ..its going to come to the Beatles song "Revolution" if things don't soon turn around ... keeps escalating.. congrats on the co write with Ms. Carolyn ..enormous poetry with much magnitude.. u both hit the target right between the eyes.. read my comment to Carolyn .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 7:16 PM
enjoyed James, interesting points, again thank you for your support.
James Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Very thoughtful read James. If you don't mind me saying, i was inclined to read this in a dry tone? I dont know why? However, I DID LIKE IT! Very timely
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