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Oh, my love, how I wish... you were here by my side so we could both surrender To this beautiful solitude, this peaceful, intoxicating silence I'm blissfully lost; killing precious time. Time I wish I could stretch... the length of the Nile River. Mute, confused ships can't seem to decide whether they're coming or going The sky is slowly changing before my eyes As the cantaloupe melon Sun fights to stay afloat over the horizon. Silence is interrupted... by the ebb and flow of the faint tides, sweeping time out of my pristine mind crying out your name in hushed tones. We both miss you so. As the calm wind sighs and whispers soft yet incomprehensible language into my pleased ears I wish you were here To bask in this soothing sounds of silence with me NA the day away Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lu Loo (Winner: 1st Place) Submitted on 09/03/2019 Sound of Silence Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton (N/A) Date written and submitted: 07/27/2019

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:19:00 PM
The imagery in this is so vivid! Congrats on your win Edward! Blessings, Kim M
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/22/2021 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim:-)
Date: 6/21/2021 5:26:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/21/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 12/22/2019 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/22/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Gregory:-)
Date: 12/22/2019 2:45:00 PM
Congrats on a great win!;)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/22/2019 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda:-)
Date: 12/22/2019 11:19:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/22/2019 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha:-)
Date: 9/7/2019 9:06:00 AM
I see you have won, I am not surprised.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/7/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thank again, Richard:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 9/7/2019 2:05:00 AM
intense poem, loving, sensual and passionate. All around a poem I adored for its softness and emotion. Great poem dear Edward. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/7/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for my placement, Luloo!:-) This is humbling and greatly gratifying!
Date: 8/1/2019 9:00:00 AM
A gorgeous piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2019 2:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard:-)
Date: 7/31/2019 9:04:00 AM
what a poignant poem laced with beautiful imagery....glad i stopped by to read this one :) Good write!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2019 3:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra:-) Glad you liked the poem!
Date: 7/27/2019 12:43:00 PM
I love the images you created here...especially "of the faint tides, sweeping time out of my pristine mind"
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanne:-)
Date: 7/27/2019 11:31:00 AM
Superb imagery--excellent write, Edward--all the best.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/27/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay:-)

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