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Doves Faltered

When doves faltered

   and babies cried,

hence blood was shed 

   in the name of the Father,

as every mother's bosom

  was purged of her child

grown to a man, only to die

  defending his brother's religion,

whilst no human was spared the

    wrath of wartime communion amid 

    contradictions of holy water's delusions


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Date: 10/17/2016 7:45:00 AM
Great write, love that dichotomy, wartime communion. Clever ,sharp piece. Viv x
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Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Viv, thought you could appreciate the doves, as you've aptly written them.
Date: 10/8/2016 11:44:00 AM
A very interesting poem indeed! Should do well for you in the contest. Good work and good luck! MC
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Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thanks MC!

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