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Birdfeeder outside Fan in the living room with Thoughts of a dove now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 1/29/2010 12:15:00 PM
Ran across this poem again--still has me smiling. Guess what--we've been having below zero temps here in North Dakota. No fan needed right now but looking forward to warmer days ahead. Keep on writing. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:36:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Matt.. so very visual.. thankxxx so very much for choosing my poem as a winner in your How to Build a Spaceship Contest... I am honored by it and appreciate your recognition of my efforts to write this new and challenging poem for your contest... am looking forward to your next contest with anticipation.. CONGRATULATIONS to u as a sponor and to all the winners and those who entered also...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/20/2010 3:58:00 PM
hmmmm bird in a high fan.......feathers flight low down death tome
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Date: 1/19/2010 11:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poetry today Matt. I look forward to reading more of it Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2010 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Matt.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/18/2010 5:06:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to enjoy. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:35:00 PM
Great Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing with these great writes. Sara
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