Dove Bleeds Poppies

I'm but a frail bird tasked to bring hope and spread peace. How shall I fly high in the sky with such a brittle burden! My heart pounds in dilemma like a ping pong ball as I release my wings in the air to take a flight at the height of a dark sky. As dark as it can be, above me, the cauldron-black sky with scary scars of blazing explosions emitting blinding light. Beneath me, the brazier ground groaning with an outcry, shedding tears of sparks that vaporize into nebulous smokes. In between is the whizzing of weapons, excreting smokes and urinating radiation that smothers the air with brutality. Warhead rockets, firing aircraft, missiles, bombs...stoke the fire of war for the sake of supremacy by killing morality. Shrills of ruination buried under the roars of madness spree while the two-legged demons having a bloodbath with big guns. Colors of bliss faded away and helpless time trying to flee as achromic misery taints moments with grim stains in gallons. Ember red blood is the only bold color that flows in streams dyeing the soil and water with a stench of rotting death. Once cultivated verdant fields are now burned into coal seams. Marred by violence, houses crumble like ashes in hearth. Such horrific images I see all around me as the hearth of fierce war burns with glaring flames and crackling noises. I fly, hover and fly with my singed wings as there is a dearth of safe shelter; my exhausted body trembles with fear. Would I be able to stop the war? I questioned myself with fear. Quite a hard-hitting answer I received in the form of a bullet that pierced my heart and I fell on the ground with tears. From my smeared blood, poppies bloom around me as I die.
Date: 11/12/2017

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Date: 12/5/2017 5:49:00 PM
It would be nice to have war end. Too many people die and children. Which is very sad. have anice evening my friend.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 12/7/2017 1:41:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comments, Darlene.
Date: 11/25/2017 11:48:00 AM
Very clever to use the dove of peace to provide his outlook on the war. Brutally stark contrasts deserves that brutal ending... but the colourful imagery you provide at the end with the white dove, blood and poppies is extremely effective. Very well done, Afzal.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/26/2017 11:23:00 PM
Thank you very much for such gracious comments, Line.
Date: 11/17/2017 10:13:00 PM
Wow Afzal this is a very strong piece of poetry. It takes one person to start a war and sending out the hundreds to die while sitting like a hero behind a desk - Oh - but if only whole populations of the world could have some influence to stop stop these atrocities - This is a most contemplative poem... Maria
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/26/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you very much for your insightful comments, Maria.
Date: 11/17/2017 10:01:00 AM
Masterpiece quality poetry, Afzal! Stunning in it's graphic detailed portrait of war violence. Poor little dove of peace ain't got a chance against the hawks of war. Shimmering platinum pen write. This poem emits aurora night sparks, so all can witness the warnings contained within. An instant fave latte. Love and peace forever.
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/26/2017 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for such kind words, Freddie and for the fave too. L&P to you as well.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:11:00 AM
Harsh hitting words, Afzal, if only our words could stop wars, yours would win!!
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/13/2017 10:26:00 PM
So true but still gotta write.
Date: 11/12/2017 8:15:00 AM
Wow Afzal!!! This is your best poem.. You have written this so well.. No one can stop a war, except for the power greedy politicians.. who stay at home and send young kids to war, just to die...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 11/12/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words and insightful comments, S.O. You really inspire me by your brilliant work too and for the record, this poem is actually a long version of my previously posted (single line) poem 'Martyred Peace' which was written for your contest.
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