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December.13. 2024

Have a Foodie Christmas Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

Dough kneaded and leavened, Designed in circular shape. Dent in the middle Deep fried or baked Dipped in sugar syrup and glazed. Dutch immigrants’ popular sweet. Delectable snack, favorite of kids.

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 12/15/2024 6:34:00 PM

A most delicious read dear Valsa. I'm now craving a donut :-D Good luck in the contest. Hugs~Anne :-)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/13/2024 10:23:00 PM

This is so excellent. When I read my Pleiades, I shudder and am tempted to delete it. Hugs.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/13/2024 4:23:00 PM

I like this recipe rolled into poetic style, and perhaps dusted with sugar. Your poem is a delicious Pleades

Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2024 10:08:00 AM

They are my favorite too. Due to high sugar problem, I can't eat it anymore. Nice reminder though.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2024 9:22:00 AM

Love them Valsa, especially those with jam in the middle. I only have them occasionally, trying to be good lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2024 5:59:00 AM

Wow!! Those doughnuts look so yummy. Heartburn city for me but I do enjoy one occasionally. Thanks for sharing this one with us. So, they originated in Holland? Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2024 2:09:00 AM

My goshhh and now I'm craving for this divine donut!!! What an impeccable and mouth-watering poem you've crafted for Andrea's contest, dear gorgeous poetess ~ I'm swooning over the ethereal flavours you've described and whilst also describing their history of origin. This is nothing less than FANTASTIC!! "Dipped in sugar syrup and glazed. Dutch immigrants’ popular sweet" Mmmmm the richness here, wowww ~ and it indeed is a celebratory treat for kids, well for everyone, haha. A very clever pleiades and you did an amazing job knitting this, best wishes for the contest ~ sending love and light to you always :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/13/2024 1:50:00 AM

Doughnuts are indeed a favorite of kids. "Deep fried or bakes, dipped in sugar syrup", am sure people with a sweet tooth would love it, though its not my favorite. How are you doing dear sweet Valsa? Its been a long time since I have been on here. Miss you and all my dear Soup friends. Have a blessed day. ~ Ani

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2024 1:40:00 AM

- Looks tempting, Valsa ... Dipped in sugar syrup ... too sweet for me :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2024 1:12:00 AM

Dear sweet valsa, gosh im trying my best to stay away from doughnuts; on a diet but if only there is such a thing as chocolate diet Hah! You did your pleiades so well, so beautiful word weaving throughout and i love also “ Dipped in sugar syrup and glazed. Dutch immigrants’ popular sweet.“ the mentioned of dutch there was insightful: and also i love how you’ve written dipped in sugar syrup! Favorite yes for kids and many; like me too. Absolutely stunning and delicious write! Made me crave doughnuts: best wishes. Sending you light always