Doubt's Rising Shadow

Doubt's Rising Shadow

                    torn from darkness
                    a burning halo divides the distant night
                    shifting orange then red across
                    the ashen clouds that draw a ribbon
                    between the now and then

                    this flat rumor bangs along
                    hangs me wordless on the truth
                    I cannot say where the singing stopped
                    the branches call their children home
                    and now without the winding sun
                    alone the autumn drops her veil

                   curtained by a shallow mist
                   the open water ends and ice compounds
                   the rocks that split the lattice
                   shapes of daylight down from horizontal
                   twisting like a question
                   hungry and unspoken

                   there is a boat
                   and we are in it
                   there is a storm
                   and we will pass through it
                   there is a moment waiting to happen
                   there is a breath I have not taken
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March 15, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Paul, I enjoyed your poem. Well written. Welcome to PS. Blessings ~ Debra
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March 13, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Great lines written. Well done :)
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