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Doubt's Rising Shadow

Doubt's Rising Shadow torn from darkness a burning halo divides the distant night shifting orange then red across the ashen clouds that draw a ribbon between the now and then this flat rumor bangs along hangs me wordless on the truth I cannot say where the singing stopped the branches call their children home and now without the winding sun alone the autumn drops her veil curtained by a shallow mist the open water ends and ice compounds the rocks that split the lattice shapes of daylight down from horizontal twisting like a question hungry and unspoken there is a boat and we are in it there is a storm and we will pass through it there is a moment waiting to happen there is a breath I have not taken

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Date: 3/15/2022 3:26:00 PM
Paul, I enjoyed your poem. Well written. Welcome to PS. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/13/2022 6:35:00 AM
Great lines written. Well done :)
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