Doubtless Wisdom

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Wise awareness predicts its salience. Strategy that stretches cognitive sentience. And the ego wants to hold on to power. A natural sense of oneness with empower. What you can handle is your intention. What you do is determined by your motivation. Your attitude influences how well you perform. It's possible that failure is the key to reform. Something is awry when everyone praises you. Create at least one foe to put you on your toe. Enjoy humble things and cherish every day. In retrospect, it may appear a significant way. Those without wisdom see murky obscurity. Thus, they are blind to the truth and reality. Written: July 14, 2022

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JCB JCB

Date: 9/6/2022 2:48:00 PM

Wonderful penning. The last lines speak volumes! “Those without wisdom see murky obscurity. Thus, they are blind to the truth and reality.“

Bill Baker

Date: 7/16/2022 8:20:00 AM

You're on a roll my friend. Another FAv for me. As you know, I love good sonnets. This one is packed with wisdom. I wanted to say, " this was my favorite line", but they all were. Great write should be a POTD in my opinion. Smiles and Blessings Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/15/2022 4:40:00 AM

Words of wisdom resonate throughout my friend. Much depth to the sentiments you convey, Lasaad.

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2022 9:44:00 PM

"Something is awry when everyone praises you. Create at least one foe to put you on your toe. Enjoy humble things and cherish every day." Words of great wisdom.... ! Concur with your profound and mature thoughts !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2022 12:28:00 PM

Love: What you do is determined by your motivation. Your attitude influences how well you perform. & Something is awry when everyone praises you. Create at least one foe to put you on your toe.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/14/2022 10:11:00 AM

Wise words written here my friend. This one is a favorite for me... God bless

Ann Foster

Date: 7/14/2022 8:00:00 AM

at least one foe... true. We need to stay sharp, and question ourselves... We need to stay close to the Lord. He will provide. Excellent work. Love this poem. Ann