Doublethink Beliefs Premiere Contest Winner

 
This Life From a child taught Catholic creed, drilled, drilled into me by school nuns; those teachings will never recede, but, since those days I have lived tons. Spirituality, is life, I found this on my long journey; and when life stabs me with her knife, I seek the deep green and ferny. In the silence of a forest, I contemplate all chosen paths; in the peace of a birds chorus, yet, still I feel the sting of wraths. With a mindset of courage, strength, and a moral way of thinking;, and a soul with great depth and length, I just face this twisted life unblinking. My Next Life I can see a girl in shadows, she looks like me but is not me; I will find her in death's repose, and will awaken as this she. In afterlife, I am reborn, to a unique language spoken; odd rituals to welcome morn, I find symbols of God broken. My past life is gone and erased, I have no emotions at all; there is no sorrow to be faced, no friends, no lovers to enthrall. This new life a bottomless void, I wonder for this place called Earth; for here I am a humanoid, maybe, maybe on my rebirth. As Our Breath Flows, Here and Now So, having considered all this, I think I will embrace living; seeking serenity and bliss, total acceptance and giving. I am okay with the fast pace, and will be the best I can be; for the Lord will provide me grace, life a puzzle given to me. I will weep and mourn when I must, will hold to my heart memory; write words to release as stardust, and treasure each sweet reverie. And when death comes to claim this girl, let me repose deep in my grave; beneath blue sky where the clouds swirl, and lay roses like a red wave. ________________ December 8, 2021 Poetry/Quatrain/Doublethink Beliefs Copyright Protected, ID 12-1411-921-08 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Doublethink Beliefs sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 12/31/2021 First Place
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Date: 9/20/2023 10:11:00 PM
Aw my dear friend, what an innovative creative work this is... I feel so grateful to God for having given me the chance today, to read this great gem of a verse. Faving this, for me to read this again. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/25/2023 3:49:00 AM
Yes, I wish many get to read this poetic gem of yours Constance... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2023 3:50:00 PM
Ani, thank you so much for visiting my poem, oh I worked hard on this one, and love it, thanks for the FAV, hugs
Date: 12/31/2021 9:13:00 AM
Feel honoured to receive this beautiful masterpiece as a contest entry. Congrats, Constance and Happy New Year!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2021 3:32:00 PM
Seeker, I loved writing this poem for you which took me several days and I am so proud of it and thank you for honoring me with First Place and a Trophy, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 12/9/2021 10:49:00 AM
Stardust indeed, my friend! Stardust indeed! To the top-o-mine-faves Constance...truly memorable ink...love the obe journey, I believe, as many aboriginal humans do, spirit flight is authentic ( dreamscapes) a gift of vision from God, your flight is among the best literature I ever have gazed upon, Constance, and am changed by such revelation (missed sharing silence with you yest. on Vie's café) ...jimmy
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Constance La France
Date: 12/9/2021 12:52:00 PM
Jimmy, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment and the FAV, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 12/8/2021 3:16:00 PM
Unblinking courage Constance ...lyrical & lovely, wishing only peace of a bird's chorus...
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2021 3:28:00 PM
James, thank you so much for the visit and nice compliment, still have 7 more verses to complete, its a long one to write ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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